Bash:
Linguistics Slaughter~Tongues, And Metaphorical Wordz Alter~Lungz//
Egocentric MC Slitz Enemies with Metaphoric Language, & leaves'em Hung//
Immolate Peasantz With Lethal Sharp Vocal Chordz, Dismember Spleenz With Bladez That Strike With Da Power Of Muscular Horses//
Disguztin Illness Spoilz Mic's, Interfer Brain Wavez With Sicknezz That Of 'Corpses'//
Evil Verbal Encantment Trapz~Soulz, Metal Plated Hand Slapz~Hoez. So Powerful My Reflection Slitz~Bowelz//
Make Weak MC's Full Of Shit~Throw~In~Towelz, WarLord Crushez Throats & Spitz~Vowelz//
Insane Wizard Of Hip-Hop Spews Skills That Penetrates Dull Cowards//
Immense Power Heats the Atmosphere, In the Sick Position I’m in I ‘Stand Tall’ like The ‘Eiffel Tower’//
Chemical Showers Erode Skin. Cannibalistic MC Swallows Bodies & Vomits ‘Skeletons’//
‘Crush Vertebrates’ like Children Wearing ‘Heavy Book-bags’ That ‘Weigh a Ton’//
Engrave Faces on Cement~Floors, Puncture Chests, & Dent~Whores Leave Throats With Cold Sores//
‘Ignore’ Unskillful Rappers like ‘Moms Telling Kids To Do Chores’//
Rip Cartilage with Verbal Machetes. Leave You Showing more ‘flesh’ then ‘Strip Clubs’//
Ignite Flares In MIC Fights, With flammable Fluidz, Spitz Sparkle Cause My Tongue Is A ‘Spark Plug’//
Ambush Armies With Parlous Words, Swing Swordz To Vertically Split~ Bones//
Spit~Chrome To Throw Hard Punches, Witz~Roam Through Muscles & penetrates Vital Organs, While I just Sit~Home//
Bladders Explode, Similar to ‘Porn’ cause ya Just ‘Blow’//

Outsida:
come to every brawl with intentions to upall/
baseball hats,bats, gats and shawls/
mic cords,swords, as weapons,whos steppin/
im the war lord,BRE reppin,lets regulate,and decampitate these emcees instigate/
penitrate with 2 inch inscisions ,Murdering niggaz like a Bloodstorm Illusion/
precisions to cause our words to do collisions/
killin other crews clans differentials and religions/
essentials,fuck it we the Illest heteral rap genreals/
Hang body parts in a Bundle , Put 2 holez through ur chest wit tha Unlimited Gundle/
ur bitch ass is scared to light candles/
Tha menacal , philosopher wordsmith lyricist u cant handle/
blow em out/and the ocean will be your caskett/
Nigga fuck with BRE , and you'll get anihalated/
more hardore than NWA,and more hated/
put you through a Dim Mist of anthology and watch u get Faded/
step to my throne ill spray you with a blow torch and a Deadly cologne/
you bitches aint even got testostorone,cause you're some pussy ass monotone/
Spitting out Hot Flames on tha microphone/

To be Continued................

uppin

IT WAS TIGHT.BOTH VERSES.I HAD TO READ YOUR VERSE A COUPLE OF TIMES BASH TO GET IT.DONT WORRY THATS A GOOD THING.HEY LETS DO A COLLABORATION,BRE AND GHETTO ANIMOSITY.PM ME IF YOU WANT TO.

yo nice shit yo this drop was nice bashes verse was solid and an eye catching overall drop 8/10

keep it up

y0o bash that was hott ....kep it up

thankz , and younggadget i got u dawg , , still uppin

........damn son ya'll riped up as usuall......nice drop fam.....both of ya'll

4 sho soilder , , , , we gotta show dem how we do it ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,still uppin

content was ok and i saw some multies in there...only thing i gotta say is

fix ya structure

u need to even line length out and dont stetch them out and dont make them too short cos that fucks up ur flow

pz

Iiiight Cuzz ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,uppin

Yo0o Bash that was tite my boi is sway302 cheak mys shyt out its one of the newest open mics right now so hit me back keep rhymin dawg i got mad props for u lol tite shyt my thread is call crazy cheak it out

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hook me up wit some feedback

yo taht was a nice drop....very extensive vocab and saw some good multis from bash. other guy was pretty good, kept it simple but still good. nice drop fellas

thanks ,,,,,,,,, i'm still uppin