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Old 05-06-03, 01:30 PM   #1
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Dead Thugs Words...

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Wrote this during testing...
Here it is...

~Slow Beat~
In a thugs life, you can only imagine what goes on//
theres gun and fights, one wrong move and ur gone//
we only feel pain, so to get it out, we combine lyrics to make a song//
Its a harsh time and we only wish we could all get along//

You dont wanna mess with those though niggas out there//
they have their own crews, and they would make ur life a nightmare//
and with the toughest guns, come the toughest stares//

Its so hard now to teach young thugs not to mess around//
they try to ignore the older ones and not make a sound//
but they dont listen so they're shot, and then found dead on the ground//

-Hook-
Take my words of advice
Cuzi'm sure u dont wanna some bitch takin ur life
I reallyknow what its all about,
I learned the hard way, and found out...

~Switch Beat~
yo, yo, yo

Niggas always tryin to be tough, but theyjust get shot up//
They dontknow when to let go, the dont know when its enough//
Either way, they either dead or they locked up//
They look back in the past and realize the "fuck-ed" up//

They alwasy carrin their steel "nine"//
they think their so touch cuz its somethin they call "mine"//(their point of view)
But really is just ap iece of metal that was mined//
It spits out hot lead that could "blow" ya head and make ya "lose" yo mind//

Well, soon these niggas are gonna learn the meaning of "rest in peace"//
Cuz before they know it, their off their own 2 feet//
Cuz most of dem get shot and dont bother wit da "po-lice"//

-Hook-

So I guess the moral to it is this//
dont think your the toughest, and dont dont think your the baddest bitch//
Cuz you will get some of dem niggas pissed//
and you dont wanna end up like ME, and a cold hard ditch//

-Hook X2-

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Old 05-06-03, 03:00 PM   #2
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.Hot.

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This joint was pretty hot... the vocab. was a little too elementary, you need some more wordplay. Otherwise, it was on point.
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Old 05-06-03, 10:51 PM   #3
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yeah some of ur lyrics were whack ,,,,,,,,,,u need to elevate , , ,but overall this drop was an aight piece
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Old 05-07-03, 01:18 PM   #4
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fuck you bash
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Old 05-07-03, 06:34 PM   #5
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that was tight dawg. Just work on your vocab a lil thats all. I'm pretty sure your next one will be even hotter if you take my advice.
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