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Attention, fam.. For you, the loss is simply a matter of comprehension, maam..
I put vets in retirement, you're the next to go.. And I'm stompin' on ya pension plan..
The sig says you beat UnEmCeEabLe.. But with all his might the man could beat you..
The kid fires ghostwriters by the hundreds.. Why bite the hand that feeds you?
Stay out of this league, Ed.. You need to stick to Audio Engagement.. (he mods there)
#1 Contender for the title? We've already picked and brought you a replacement.. (that's me!)
When Ali's in a battle.. All of RB is enchanted to "Subscribe to this Thread.."
He reads the Headless Horseman just so he can ride with the dead..
Now Ed's denied of his cred.. This is a tall order, like a pair of erect fags.. (bundles of sticks= faggot)
Crook's reported to Tom Ridge.. His record's more suspicious than an Arab with jet lag..
I'd probably make a SARS joke.. But I've been informed they've just been "played.."
The first few bars were the calm before the storm.. Too bad the storm was just delayed
I'll finish with a flurry.. You're on the ropes, might as well build a booth in the corner..
If Ed's record was a history book.. The only truth'd be Sojourner


ahhh fourteen, not so good.. Good Luck

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Comin in this Fight throwin fists with Hits that be Detrimental
So Im takin out Lyrics like a bad track with a tight instrumental
Kept in the Kettle with a bone to pick this Fag looses Poorly
Id say how wack you are but your verse proves it for me
Raw to the core, If you HAD a win streak now it must end
Hell if the cops caught ya sellin Drow you still couldnt Bust-Ed
Left for dead leavin em Shakin, Brain waves in a mass clutter
Ali was good back in the day but now the man can barely stutter
Word to ya Mother, tell her Ya run the rap shit.. SIKE ya bitch
Thought his name was gettin big when I

Typed it LIKE THIS

Battle was over quick, And the funny thing is I didnt even try
While you slaved away for three days just to come up with ten lines
But you tried, And this is Game everyone can play but listen up
Better elevate soon cuz If rappin was a team you wouldnt be good enough

Lyricali::


Attention, fam.. For you, the loss is simply a matter of comprehension, maam..
I put vets in retirement, you're the next to go.. And I'm stompin' on ya pension plan..

Ehh.. 4.0

The sig says you beat UnEmCeEabLe.. But with all his might the man could beat you..
The kid fires ghostwriters by the hundreds.. Why bite the hand that feeds you?

Dencent.. 5.5

Stay out of this league, Ed.. You need to stick to Audio Engagement.. (he mods there)
#1 Contender for the title? We've already picked and brought you a replacement.. (that's me!)

lol.. that made me laugh (That's me) 6.5

When Ali's in a battle.. All of RB is enchanted to "Subscribe to this Thread.."
He reads the Headless Horseman just so he can ride with the dead..

Coulda been worded alot betta.. 4.5

Now Ed's denied of his cred.. This is a tall order, like a pair of erect fags.. (bundles of sticks= faggot)
Crook's reported to Tom Ridge.. His record's more suspicious than an Arab with jet lag..

lol.. 5.5

I'd probably make a SARS joke.. But I've been informed they've just been "played.."
The first few bars were the calm before the storm.. Too bad the storm was just delayed

Umm.. 4.0

I'll finish with a flurry.. You're on the ropes, might as well build a booth in the corner..
If Ed's record was a history book.. The only truth'd be Sojourner

Ha.. 5.0

Overall:: 35

Crook Ed::


Comin in this Fight throwin fists with Hits that be Detrimental
So Im takin out Lyrics like a bad track with a tight instrumental

Nice.. 7.5

Kept in the Kettle with a bone to pick this Fag looses Poorly
Id say how wack you are but your verse proves it for me


Cool.. 6.0

Raw to the core, If you HAD a win streak now it must end
Hell if the cops caught ya sellin Drow you still couldnt Bust-Ed

Good Wordplay 6.5

Left for dead leavin em Shakin, Brain waves in a mass clutter
Ali was good back in the day but now the man can barely stutter

5.5

Word to ya Mother, tell her Ya run the rap shit.. SIKE ya bitch
Thought his name was gettin big when I

Typed it LIKE THIS

lool.. 7.5

Battle was over quick, And the funny thing is I didnt even try
While you slaved away for three days just to come up with ten lines

Nice.. 6.5

But you tried, And this is Game everyone can play but listen up
Better elevate soon cuz If rappin was a team you wouldnt be good enough

Ehh.. 4.5



Overall:: 44

Vote=Crook-Ed, One Sided Battle..

I disagree, this battle was close, but I also vote Crook Ed,
Here's the reason's

Dope Verses:
Comin in this Fight throwin fists with Hits that be Detrimental
So Im takin out Lyrics like a bad track with a tight instrumental

^^Great opener^^

When Ali's in a battle.. All of RB is enchanted to "Subscribe to this Thread.."
He reads the Headless Horseman just so he can ride with the dead..

^^Great Verse^^

The sad part was nothing else really stuck out so let's go to the boards
Flow: LyricAli
Punches: Crook Ed
Lines: Crook ed
Overall: Crook Ed

Vote: Crook Ed (Yo come peep my battle vs. KnightShade)

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Crook Ed won this one;
good drop for the opener, had better punchez
(word to ya mother, tell her ya run the rap shit, sike ya bitch/
thought his name was gettin big when I TYPED IT LIKE THIS/)
that line was cold

Lyricali did alright;
seems like u forced it for ur opener, ur last line was good though
had a good flow but other than that crook ed took it

crook ed won this.the shit jackmioff did was unneccesary.it was close but i couldnt get a grasp of lyricali verse because of the way he typed it.
my vote=crook ed

peep this battlehttp://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?postid=416355#post416355

Unneccesary My Ass.. That Is My Vote.

*cough,shut up bitch,cough*
you wack as hell.all you do is talk shit.lets battle you asshole.

...Ali came pretty good but Ed came nicer...The opening bar, the Ali stutter line and the Bust-Ed one were all dope and got you the win...Lyric came good but there wasn't really a line that punched heavy...Good battle though...Vote=Ed

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