Ok This Is Set Under "Start a Battle"

5-10 Lines
no dickrydin, crew any of that shit.
i think under system its first to get 5 votes wins
and With New System Before You Poll Vote
You Must Have Over 100 Posts and Must write
a over 100 Character Explanation (its not as long as it sounds)

YOU SPIT FIRST

Yo i made the challenge so ill go first//
Heres what im spitting fer mah verse//

you talking all fucking hehehe/ {il battle hehehehe}
who the fuck did u think u was battling b?/
I dont know exactly where you get the nerve/
but im straight like a line dawg, and your the curve/

Look hommie this is the deal/
you wanted a snack/
well heres the whole fucking meal/

Last night i had your mom in bed/
i slapped her upside down cos she bit while giving head/
thats right dawg im capping on ya familly/
Who knows what ill be spittin next time we battle gunna battle b/

*check* *Is going to Overlook fact that Jmista went over line limit*
ok

You Be Spitting like your a disease , but dude u aint CONTAGIOUS//
spitting weak shit like that to me, that was fuckin COURAGEOUS//

I Look Up At Your Flow and I'm Thinkin what the fucks this guy ON//
he writes that shit , pretends its a battle when hes already WITHDRAWN//

Newbie you got a lot to learn about Rhyming , Flowing and BATTLES//
The Complexity of my Flows got ya fucked up, yer heads all RATTLED//

I'm Reppin' the West SIDE and All Of Our Glory and PRIDE//
West, to the East, South to the North. I Dunn give a Fuck Where RESIDE//

Dont Challenge Me Again Kid, the Shit I Spit is Subliminal and ILL//
You've Just Been Merked , may as Well take the Contraceptive Suicide PILL


-Keep It Real

alright im upping this shit for votes
come on guys we got some quality flowing going on here
i need 100 characters here to make it so i can do it
so ill just keep typing . and done.

UPPIN FOR VOTES

Vote = Blaze_2k4

his verse had better punches and more originality. the line dat the other guy used about havin his mum in bed and her givin head......................been used soooooo many times.

You Be Spitting like your a disease , but dude u aint CONTAGIOUS//
spitting weak shit like that to me, that was fuckin COURAGEOUS//

i liked dat line, gave u a good start.

Newbie you got a lot to learn about Rhyming , Flowing and BATTLES//
The Complexity of my Flows got ya fucked up, yer heads all RATTLED//

that was another good line and thats y i voted 2 Blaze.

wordplay is betta with Blaze 2k4. the other one was just too borin. i read the meal part and i just stopped. if its gonna be weak at least make it entertainin.

vote => blaze 2k4

sorri i cant vote poll yet ill waste some posts to get above 100 and ill com bac.

alright thanks alot, ok i got 2 votes , im pretty sure wit hthe new system we need 5 , so uppin for 3 more votes to finish this bitch off

uppin for some votes ... please dont sleep on this
uppin for some votes ... please dont sleep on this
uppin for some votes ... please dont sleep on this

nough said dog. Ya'll both need practice. I got beef wit Blaze, but he had the better verse on this. so...

Vote: Blaze2k4

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Ok well you both need practise as do I. But hey who doesn't right? Anyways.. I thought Blaze took this one. I didn't even really see punches in the other guy. "you talking all fucking hehehe/ " J Mista that wasn't creative at all.. If anyone else didn't notice I did.. were you listening to E when you wrote this? Anyways..

Vote Blaze

Alright, I guess that my vote doesn't even count but nonetheless Blaze definately hit harder and kept a better flow.
Vote=Blaze_2k4

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VOTE = BLAKE

REASON: No contest really...he had betta flow, harder punches, better vocab...beat him in liek every aspect of battling

Return tha favor nd vote on my battle wit master blaster:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44593

blaze had betta content
poll vote blaze



Newbie you got a lot to learn about Rhyming , Flowing and BATTLES//
The Complexity of my Flows got ya fucked up, yer heads all RATTLED//
keep rollin dog

man wtf?? Blaze mos def. won.Tha otha dude was just whack he had no creativity and no punchlines.
You Be Spitting like your a disease , but dude u aint CONTAGIOUS//
spitting weak shit like that to me, that was fuckin COURAGEOUS//

I Look Up At Your Flow and I'm Thinkin what the fucks this guy ON//
he writes that shit , pretends its a battle when hes already WITHDRAWN//

Newbie you got a lot to learn about Rhyming , Flowing and BATTLES//
The Complexity of my Flows got ya fucked up, yer heads all RATTLED//
3 bars merked ya fella

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vote=blaze
Harder punches and better wordplay, I especially like the first metaphor with the contagious shit. You both need to elevate, and you can't afford to have filler with any battle with a maximum of 10 lines or less.
Jmista, you need to have some original punches because you used a stupid "yo mama" line in yours, and that shit is more played out than Michael Jordan.
peep this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44784
Peace

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