ok
no d/r votes etc. etc
up to 3 k.o
up to 5
10-15 lines max
im actually a lil intimidated by ur record, so u spit first, lol

Ok lets work

your record should look like oprahs so-fa---->(0-0)....you taking more strokes than a-cho-cha::
your Hawaiian?....but your jokes dont even get a-low-Ha!!::

Its Ova, I got em...you wouldnt be a product of this environment...if you were groceries-shoppin::
you could be a vending machine with a hole in the bottom....and DIMES...you still wouldnt drop em::
Lucky Im Not Him!!!............................................ ........................

He cant see me right in front of his face like I'm the ring, on this bulls-snout::
nothing is off "the top of his head" like tupac shakurs-scalp::
Dont mean to Knock this Tourist-OUT...but hes off track like a bus without a Assured-Route::
He spits "light"...like the official hawiian drink was "Coors"-Now::

Your "CAPS CANT HELP YOU NOW" like I knocked-your-knees-in::
because those punches dont connect, your only "Connection" left, is "Polynesian"::<[[[look at his sig]]]

No Offence to you....lol

your to small, these Pants you cant fill....you need Inhanced-Skill::
Face it, we aint seen you "come with the MAGIC" in a while, like you were GRANT-HILL!!!!::
Stand still...you cant go "Double Your Wieght" like "Ant-Hills::
your gonna pay like past bills.....you wont "bite anymore after this", like DeathRow Last-Meals::

1 line left


Its about to GO DOWN.....hope you know Now....after this you got "to much to MAKE UP" like you were a "Hoe Clown":15)

Intimidated?..why?.....^^^^Oh I see Now^^^^.....lol

dam....shit man that was tight. i almost wanna surrender already. but illl drop as soon as i get home from school. nice shit man.

*10-0..nigga please*

You couldnt even elevate to this battle, so ill put things in translation, ur lyrics is a like a 12 yr old boy, it gotcha hard up DickChasin!
With ur 10-0 record, dick suckins the only indication
Put a dick in ur face, and ud probly "RISE" to the occasion.
My word against yours, it hunts u down, like a determined rebel
ur words is like an xperienced slut, jus tryna get her nut
cuz u take dick suckin to a whole nutha LEVEL.

I'll slice ur neck to c the blood trickle and the heart pump INCREASE
ill carve u with a pocket knife, as i deleiver u piece by piece


u couldnt bulk up ur verse if u was bakin ur lyrics
in YEAST.
>>DAM!<<


im squeezin ur limbs together, while i get pleasure as they get tighter
while u screamin like the bitch u r sayin "Im a Lover not a Fighter!"

Fuck HAWAIIANS? fuck blacks, u big lip-cockeyed-MR CANT GET RIGHT.
u couldnt eat ur Soul_food_lovin_ass back in this battle if u had a OVERBITE.
This battles commin slowly to an end, ur time to disconnect is due
after this match ull be long forgotten, got niggas sayin..
PRODUCTIONS WHO?
if u read up to here, u now realize that this battles done
cuz now i gotchu sittin back sayin..."Dam...now im 10-1"

RISE TO THIS

gl dog, u got my respects the whole way. *for the RecRd* none of this shit is personal. so respect the flow and dont get racist on my ass. Votes ^^^

[Fuck HAWAIIANS? fuck blacks, u big lip-cockeyed-MR CANT GET RIGHT.
u couldnt eat ur Soul_food_lovin_ass back in this battle if u had a OVERBITE.
This battles commin slowly to an end, ur time to disconnect is due
after this match ull be long forgotten, got niggas sayin..
PRODUCTIONS WHO?
if u read up to here, u now realize that this battles done
cuz now i gotchu sittin back sayin..."Dam...now im 10-1"

RISE TO THIS [/B][/QUOTE]



^^I Have To Give IT Up TO PC....U Know Why.......RIse Was Nice Wit His.....And I Was Like.....I Know PC Can't Come Back From That.........But This RIght HEre Was A Bad Azz Come Back......Seriously.........This Had ME Laughin Hard.......I'm Still Laughin'.........My VOte Goes To PC.............................1

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Blessed wit Skillz

ooooooooooooooooooo shit that was so funny omg even my father laughed (stern man) nice comeback haiku i thought it was over with the first spit but u had me goin there .. i like last line also
vote=haiku

haiku i hate yo ass but i give it up you won..... NICE fuckin comeback.... you really elevated since you started....actually reppin tha polynesians....

thanks guys. 3-0 uppin, we need poll votes guys. i got three voices but not three polls. cmon guys les go dont sleep on this.

gl rise

He cant see me right in front of his face like I'm the ring, on this bulls-snout::
nothing is off "the top of his head" like tupac shakurs-scalp::
~Rise~....classic line...butiful


u read up to here, u now realize that this battles done
cuz now i gotchu sittin back sayin..."Dam...now im 10-1"
~Pc's best line^^^~

Is every one reading the same battle that I am? Pc had a well rounded verse but he only had like 2 good punches..

All of Rises punches were on point....^^looks like a case of D.Ryding to me...or hate...well I'ma keep it real and give a accurate answer

punches:Rise
flow:both
metas:Rise
multis:Rise
wordplay:Rise
personals:Pc

It takes more than personals to win a match

vote=Rise

.dam it say I aint post an exlanation...WTF is That about?............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................

Vote => ^pC^H4iKU <=

Y? cauz he turned it back on rise with a nice line.
Fuck HAWAIIANS? fuck blacks, u big lip-cockeyed-MR CANT GET RIGHT.
u couldnt eat ur Soul_food_lovin_ass back in this battle if u had a OVERBITE.

heheh good shit. respect to both

easy battle to vote on...Rise took it with his "A-low-ha"
line..lmao that was tight...barz were uneven as fuck
but the overall wordplay and punches went to rise!

Vote-Rise

PC killed it, punches made me laugh harder.. basically 'cause of the F-blacks comeback, although I totally dis-agree with saying that.. it was a good comeback...

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yoooooo that shit was tooooo funny!!!!!! i actually enjoyed reading somebodies battle! both of u came out hard as a bitch but PC had my ass trippin like he was a Hawaiian CEDRICK the Entertainer
but Rise came out harder! like....
your to small, these Pants you cant fill....you need Inhanced-Skill::
Face it, we aint seen you "come with the MAGIC" in a while, like you were GRANT-HILL!!!!::
Stand still...you cant go "Double Your Wieght" like "Ant-Hills::
your gonna pay like past bills.....you wont "bite anymore after this", like DeathRow Last-Meals::

vote:Rise

good shit niggas!!!!

good shit Pc........its 5-3 in explained and 4-1 in Poll votes........Might be my first L....WoW

Well if you win....then we will have a Re..one day...lol.

But for now, uppin for more votes...

Cant win em all