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Old 05-08-03, 04:31 PM   #1
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Luv Story ft. Ryk da StYk

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CliCC me!!!
^^^ " Luv Story" desCribes a relationship from beginning to end...ryk on voCals...

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Old 05-08-03, 10:12 PM   #2
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Damn damn...am feelin the contend and flow fosho beat is tight

FAm this wus sick who is yo boy reppin wit ya??
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Old 05-09-03, 02:35 AM   #3
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Are you a guy or a girl...I'm pretty sure a guy but your avy was throwin me off haha....beat is coo...You flowin good on track..Dunno bout the hook, I"m not much of a fan of that voice but the verses are good, second verse is very nice...all round perty good shit dogg...Keep it up...
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Old 05-09-03, 05:14 AM   #4
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i dunno i like my avy the way it is...maybe i'll CHange it....haha...thx yo....i think the Choruses are niCe...i dunno..lets get more ppls' thoughts...
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Old 05-09-03, 01:39 PM   #5
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That was definately nice. The flow was on point, pretty good delivery. The chorus was a little confusing to listen to cause the multiple voices seemed to clash with each other volume wise, which made it at points hard to understand.

The beat you used was a nice choice cause it wasn't too sentimental sounding but still fit the theme, and it matched your voice fairly well.
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