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05-09-03, 12:21 AM
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Jee-You Knit?
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What is it for?
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Yo I moved this from Poetic Scriptures cause no one peeps it, so close that one there, and let me keep this one.
All that is happening, what is it for? The disease, the anguish, the fighting, the war. The hatred of race because of their skin. The hatred of gays for who they fuckin'. The lies upon lies that politicians put out. The whole war, what is it about? The attack on Iraq is it for oil? Is oil enough to make world's tensions boil? The death of soldiers fighting for more. All that is happening, what is it for? The murder of people why is it condoned? Is the death of a person right to help one's own? How many murders can you stand? How much blood can you wipe off of your hands? How much evidence do you really got? How many lies to a nation can be bought? Does anyone care, is anyone home? The murder of people why is it condoned? Patriotism what is it for? Is it a way to help market your war? Is it really the land of the free, home of the brave? When a whole race of people that we're trying to enslave. To make into the spitting image of us. Why are we right, why do we make the fuss? Everything over there was running alright? What was the point of going into a fight? Well there's no way that I can take anymore? All that is happening, what is it for?
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05-09-03, 12:33 AM
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IP:
DEEEP SHIT FAM......am feelin the wordplay and the contend...but is repeating for example how much how much how much....lol
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05-09-03, 11:05 AM
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IP:
Uppin'
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05-10-03, 07:04 PM
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IP:
Wasn't to bad. More poetry than a rap, but I can understand why you posted it in here.
Well, there wasn't a lot of emphasise on flow, but considering everything you were talking about, completely understandable. The points you made, bang on. Exactly what a lot of people are thinking. "The hatred of race because of their skin." - Good Line. "The hatred of gays for who they fuckin'." - Good line as well. Not many would say something like that. Nice... "How many lies to a nation can be bought?" - Excellent Line! ...Not to bad, not to bad... |
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05-10-03, 07:06 PM
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Jee-You Knit?
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IP:
Thanks it's always good to get the Super-Mods opinion.
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05-10-03, 10:08 PM
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IP:
Mad dude, you know this is sick. The flow seemed a little hard to catch, and there wasn't very much of wordplay or anything, but you pulled off a nice simple piece that expressed thoughts perfectly, which is a rare thing now. Nice work dude, peep my piece(link in sig)
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