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05-09-03, 07:47 PM
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Third track from A2Z's album... "Uphill battle""
IP:
aight this is my first topical drop on my album "XYZ"
[Hook] This is an uphill battle// Struggling up the ladder, looking for a handle// Something to grab on to, something to grapple// Everybodyt his is an uphill battle Picture this: a young boy still wet behind the ears// Trying in the rap world getting nothing but jeers// What the fuck would you do? Give up?// Drop all your dreams and say enoughs enough?// Nuh uh, no way not for this cat im trying// Im goinna suceed or while i trying im dieing// Cuz I can't give up... can't take this rap world and quiet up// Imma speak my piece even f i get shot up// Theres low blows and backstabbing, theres no other way// Ya gotta struggle to the top, to the place where it plays// [hook] Baby momma gotta love her... but she won't stop yelling// Will there be police involved? Theres no fucking telling// Ya try to reasonable, ya ask her nicely// After all, ya don't wanna kill ya wifey// But no, she aint having it, she just keeps bitching// The rent, the baby, the car SHE WONT FUCKING LISTEN// Ya getting so pissed, the anger burns inside// Your Adrenaline kicking into hyper drive// But mind says 'kill her'' but ya heart says 'no'// Remember she put up with ya nagging yo// 'Aw who cares, she fucking deserves it'// Does she really? Or are YOU the one who started shit?// So ya back down let her screams wake the dead// Its an uphill battle ya'll but ya gotta use ya head// [hook] Sitting at ya desk... thinking about tonight// The big rap battle... the shits gonna be tight// But you got homework about as high as you// Ya sit and think... What the fuck do you do?// Ya already flunking, but ya almost at a D// If ya get up to a C you can get in the University// But the battle... How can u miss it?// But ya got ya life ahead of ya... ya can't just say piss it// Let it go and watch ya lif slip between ya fingers// End up desperate for money, being the man that pulls the trigger// Unload three and a super market guy// Run out the door and theres fourty cops outside// 10 year minimum for armed robbery// All because u up and said "Fuck the D"// To go and battle, something that wouldn't even win?// Fuck this dude, pick back up ya pen// [hook x5] uppin for feedback on my TOPICAL verse |
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05-09-03, 09:10 PM
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IP:
yo do i have to uppin it already?
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05-09-03, 10:12 PM
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this drop was better than tha other one , , , ,but it still lacked wordplay ,
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05-10-03, 11:24 AM
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uppin
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05-10-03, 11:26 AM
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IP:
i didnt find it that good...its aight like my man Bash said its lacked word play complexity and all that good shit...keep elevating though...wahid
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05-10-03, 11:28 AM
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IP:
yeah, but this song is serious not fancy this song is supposed to tell a story, so i tried to avoid all the metas and wordplay ya knwo what i mean... this is one of the few serious songs on my album so i needed to make that evident
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