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nobodies perfect we all make mistakes in life/
I shouldn't think about pickin up a knife/
even though nobody cares about my feelins/
the only way i can survive is stealin and drug dealin/
i know that ain't true theres so many things i can do/
but you hatin niggas don't know what i've been through/
how would you feel if ya homies left you out in the open/
it agravates me when you hatin niggas pretend/
why can't you be yourself that's all you gotta compriehend/
all you gotta do is pay attention to ya life it ain't that hard to understand/
i use to hate my personality but i got over it/
and i learned not to take shit when i'm tryna elevate in my own spit/
cus i know practice makes perfect and if i fall ....just get back up and don't quit/
i have a dream and i have my life set on goals/
before i can accomplish that i have to go through so many obstacles/
i smart enough not to sell my soul/
i know god is by my side till the day i die/
so you know i have faith and i'll always try/
i'm lettin you know i'm movin on from my anger and pain/
i'm puttin that in the past and never lettin it remain in my brain/
i use to hate wakin up in the mournin from all the torment in my days/
until i met maryjane and we started to blaze/

i need feedback on this plz
i keyed this to fast i just wanted to see how i did