i'm sorry mom this is a fuck up way to say happy mother's day when i'm still livin without you each and everyday please tell me why they had to talk my only mom away my only mother figure that i had to wake me day after day it hurts inside to tell my friends that my momma died without you mom things ain't gone never be the same cause from that point right now all i fill is pain and for that bitch who murdered my fuckin momma let me catch you bitch i ma put them thangs on ya when i heard the news i wanted to lay down and cry better yet fuck that i really wanted to lay down and die yo friends say i'm lookin just like you day after day so far i'm so hurt i don't know what the fuck to say i think about you all the time how could they kill ya mom you never commited a crime now i'm livin my life with out mom when they find the niggas that killed you i'ma tick like a fuckin bomb them dirty bitches them hoes don't deserve to live i'ma get you hoes and let you know who the fuck i am you took the queen of my house hole you didn't even get to see us move out of the ghetto and to all of you males of females that lost ya mom i feel ya dog i know where you comin from this is a fucked up mother's day that's all i got to say

THIS WAS A TIGHT NARRATIVE PEICE BUT IT WAS A LITTLE HARD TO FOLLOW...HIT UP IMMACUALTE CONCEPTION

thats nice

alright, uppin it, but you should find a way to separate ya werdz, like commas, these(<>), or bars(//).