C'mon VP, lets do it again, same spits

You should quit this shit, go back to sucking dick, crack/

you'd make a lot more money than you can from rap/

you better not come in my way when i'm drivin/

i pull out my ak and blast ain't no survivin'/

so i'll stay on this mic and i spit at your mum/

and i bring the pain with a lyrical bomb/

you ain't ready for me, i'm 500 megatons/

you just a half ton, bitch the odds are millions to none/

i crash you like Baghdad after gulf war 1/

i splatter your brains, leaving you laid out cold/

your man called, 'is he ok?', said i put you on hold/

permanently, now you're six feet deep/

buried you with a spade i killed you with, left you in a heap/

i guess you quit, coz u can't handle this,/

you should put me on replay to learn some shit/

That was my shit. I'm just starting and my flow is elevating to levels as high as flyweights, i'm a promising rapper, i can do this shit with a unique style and this being my first battle is important, so i put a lot into it. Uppin' for my votes.
Respect to VP, post your shit!

it's 10-15 lines, wassup villagepimp, lets go, no crew hating, all that shit, once again 10-15 lines, use your verse, put that shit in

Sorry it took so long... haven't been on... here it is, same thang.... remember I had spit 1st...

See if I were Deciet, I'd just take this reciept//

And race my gay ass home, before village pimp puts my head on roam//

I don't know why this bitch think he got game, cuz last rhyme of his was so so lame//

Now Deciet your shot are really missin' me, probably cuz I've hit you so hard that you can't see//

This is so ill that your your goin' numb, so don't fuckin' act like I ain't won//

I'll rip out your throat because I hate mother fuckers who go off and gloat//

So go ahead bitch and hit backspace, cuz you kno I'm about to spit this in ya face//

If ya can't take the heat, then get the fuck off RB, Cuz if ya take me lightly, your crew be minus a g//

You feed off this you little bitch, and I'll kill you you slut bitch//

I'm from KCMO and we hard-core killin', When I get pissed your blood be a spillin'//

So next time you think you can battle me, get real mother fucker cuz I am VP//

__________________

what is happening here????????????????????????????????? Good job everyone. You all get a vote.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uppin' fo' VOTES..........................................
.................................................. ..................
.................................................. ..................
.................................................. ............

__________________

Uppin' fo' VOTES..........................................
.................................................. ..................
.................................................. ..................
.................................................. ............

__________________

uppin'............................................ .................................................. .................................uppin'
WILL RETURN VOTES

__________________

uppin'............................................ .................................................. .................................uppin'
WILL RETURN VOTES

__________________

my vote goes to deceit. more original and betta punches. y'all go vote on my battle 2 tyman vs Genius http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=49639 be honest whodis

__________________
2 Tyma AKA Boy wonder

UPpin'............................................ .................................................. ........oNLy 1-0 him.............................let's see sum more votin'

__________________

Both verses werent that good. But I'm votin for Deciet. HE had better punches.
................................

hey deceit you're a biter that second line you wrote came from eminem to benzino on the shady records invasion mixtape that should be an automatic fuckin loss you fuckin suck to bitin some one else i can't vote and shit but still motha fucka you bit some's shit

__________________
shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

Dat ain't cool Deceit... Usin' other people's shit.............................................. I thought you were above that......................uppin'

__________________