Look at the lines, they are not right,
in a wavy pattern, you will write,
Nothing is right, the whole world is wrong,
it seems like your life, was turned upside down,
Ever wonder, what could've been?
searched for the path, and dug deep within?
A chunk is missing, it never feels whole,
until that day, someone fills up that hole,
Who you are, I cannot see,
for I don't know, what fate will bring,
But there's the day, when the blind man sees,
when we call discover, our destinies,
Through what you believe, you are given new eyes,
to discover new things, through all of the signs


just somethin...i was bored so there ya go....

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This was a good one. I really felt it.


"Nothing is right, the whole world is wrong,
it seems like your life, was turned upside down,
Ever wonder, what could've been?
searched for the path, and dug deep within?
A chunk is missing, it never feels whole,"

I really liked those lines. Seems like it applies to myself. Really nice job. I find myself searching for your posts in this forum now, since you always got a good one.

This was tight ...
ur rhyme was a bit off but its all good,
i followed it well,

Props

Pz

Hey, you right some good stuff when you're bored. I wonder if you, as the author, have a complete comprehensive grasp upon the words you transcribed or not. Or if it was somehow you sitting down and that being what came out?

But hey, even if I myself don't fully understand the words and what you ment they still have meaning.

~Shalom~

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I'm taking that as a compliment.