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Old 05-13-03, 07:08 PM   #1
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well as this boy of mine runs his fingers throw my hair he stares in my eyes that's a sign that he cares my emotions for him grows day after day i love him so much i don't know what to say my hormones jump as he walks over to me i think this is my boy trully i really think this is the love of my life i wish one day to become his wife and if he brakes my heart it would cut like a nife i really think this boy would treat me right and if a day would come that he would leave my side i would try to get him off, get him off my mind but it hasn't come close to that we're too deep in love he got my body feelin like the heavens above when push comes to shove he's there by my side he's the only boy that will really see what i feel inside and even though i could be on my own i don't want to be all alone without my king by myside in my heart i will cry he alway smile when i'm passin by he wrote a poem it was about me i'm so in love i wish you guys could see i feel like an angel with no wings it's all cause of love you guys know what i mean
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Old 05-13-03, 07:33 PM   #2
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It was decent, hard to read tho...I think if you developed your ideas a lil more it would be that more interestin, naimeen? but keep doin what you do~
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Old 05-13-03, 07:36 PM   #3
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this was nice boo,

it was simple but sweet, from the heart..

liked it...

keep doing ya thing ma..
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Old 05-13-03, 07:41 PM   #4
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Saladin thank you very much boo
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Old 05-13-03, 07:47 PM   #5
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Tamaira nice Poetry baby ........... tha content was madd Ill....................u should have Let me get in on this Joint.............................Keep spittin baby................
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Old 05-13-03, 09:07 PM   #6
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Hey, you seem really happy I liked the writing, a little hard to read but I'm glad I did. Keep on posting more.
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Old 05-14-03, 06:32 PM   #7
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uppin for my fam
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Old 05-17-03, 07:02 PM   #8
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girl ya fucking cock whipped u need to get out an get some bigger wood like my 9' lumber
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