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05-13-03, 07:25 PM | #1 | |
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Don't be all up in mines
IP:
Always in my Kool-aid and neva knowin that flava
I wouldn't tell you my bizzness not Now and not Later All up in mines you need to find ya own Sittin wonderin why things aint right at home It's all good in my hood...What about yours? Whay you lookin like that... You aint pleasin ya boy? Be tryna give advice but neva take tha ish What you need to do is stay off my dick! Find ya own damn life and stay out mine Cause as far as eyes can see Baby it's jus fine Nosey ass female wanna know every detail Tryna put me in yours so you can know mine Talkin to you is a waste o my time Aint got nothin betta to do then meddle in my stuff But when I get in yo face you wanna fuss! (hell naw!) Jus mind ya own Don't worry about me I'm still young! I gots plenty of time you see? I'm a make mistakes and have good and bad times But six words for you... DON"T BE ALL UP IN MINES! |
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05-13-03, 09:18 PM | #2 | |
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IP:
This was pretty good. I feel the same damn way about some people. Why they gotta worry about my stuff when they got problems of their own?? Anyways, nice post.
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05-14-03, 06:07 PM | #3 | |
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IP:
.....hmm....no comment...no names... * grinnin *
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05-14-03, 06:32 PM | #4 | |
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IP:
Legendary thank you
D shut up you don't know who I'm talkin bout! It might be you... |
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05-15-03, 12:00 AM | #5 | |
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IP:
Props,
i liked dis .. rhymed & flowed well, Pz |
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05-15-03, 01:32 PM | #6 | |
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IP:
thanks
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05-16-03, 09:10 PM | #7 | |
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IP:
Chick please
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05-19-03, 01:11 PM | #8 | |
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IP:
Heffa don't start nothin wont be nothin
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05-19-03, 04:32 PM | #9 | ||
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IP:
I checked out your piece and i think you are showing alot of meaning but you tend to seek the black hole of simplicity. Many of your rhymes tend to be very typical. Try to work on a more abstract measure and i think you'll find some promising results in the diversity of your works to come.
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05-19-03, 07:13 PM | #10 | |
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IP:
Thank You deacon that was very insightful.
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