20 lines max
no crew vote, d/r, recycling, etc....
let the best mc win...
I'll spit first

this is the beginning of your end's defeat
i'll seep, in ya house while your sleep
put the A to the K (AK) up to your IRA (ear)
having you in FEARA, and APPEARA in your dreams
making it SEEM, like you really have more skill THAN ME
come back to REALITY, so i can finish you off with my FATALITY
making your end of the road, towards life in this battle
get on your saddle, and prepare for a beaten with a paddle
leaving you with 1 LOST chunk in your ass
this is your past, i flowed to fast and surpassed you
without trying, stop denying, and lying that you can spit
my left fist, hit nigga's lips, with more punches alone
you have throne more than 40, and broke your bones
prone to be blown out by any mc, use this key
try and try again until you just on ONE KNEE
bowing to me, excepting its your destiny
to lose to this NEWB

when you gonna post your end..... ...............
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yo listen up yo end set up our battle while you at it@#@
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yo... i'm posting today... expect it soon i guess or whatever... peace....

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i slay with words because...

im laced with tools, with ease, i'll deface you dude...
just check your profile, we know your're 'basic fool'...
a waste, a crude, your math is to get laid with two's...
you're now 'outta your boundaries' like you 'play the rules'...(doesn't follow tha rules/laws/blah'z)

im rippin' demons, knock your lungs til i skip your breathin'...
tha only time your 'flow is like fluid' is when you're 'spittin semen'...
my disses keep 'em ear struck...i'll string you bastard...
my styles bizzare when i kill you with tha rings of saturn...
might as well sing in pattern, 'cause in rap you lose...
you swearin' you gangsta but tha only one with a gat thats bruised...(even if he hada gun but doesn't shoot)
i'll attack ya crew my heats demandin' your teeth for slammin'...
which arm you write with?...*CHOP* take this as tha only time you'll be able to battle me 'single handed'...

WIZZY, im'ma be going away for tha weekend onna ball tourny so i'll hit you back on like tues. aight? peace, and whatevers clever...

Akira.. nice battle homie... i just hope you don't d/r like my last opponent, i know he swayed votes somehow but fuck it, i move on, anyways.... as long as the voters have a valid reason for their vote, im perfectly fine with it... just dont say someone won on flow alone... analyze everything please voters... peace

uppin for votes!!...............................
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nice battle your_end ......................
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yo it goes ta akira man the MC juss did some shit i neva seen on this shit she or he man shit rhyme by changin the way the words was spell and thats was hott good style are you a girl or a guy akira ???????

vote:akira

Please use the Poll.......ppl at the top of this thread for votes
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uppin for votes

vote=end
i was feelin his style and i liked that shit at end.
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Yo I can't vote yet


But If I could I am votting for End

Vote=End

Yo return the favour

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=47578

uppin for votes !!!! on the polls!!!
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