people bitch that i mess around to much and dont do enough open mics so dont sleep on this. i put alot of thought into this.

shit gets deep in New Mex. streets so I never speak/
lay with my eyes closed but my mind never sleeps/
I seek knowledge of the great ones, somebody notice me/
it seems my depiction’s of life reflect street poetry/
what came to be of me and my life’s sacrifices/
I took the wrong turn now I’m laying dead lifeless/
forget the niceness my life tied with insecurity/
the purity is gone now I’m trapped in obscurity/
I sure to be another lost soul stuck in the twilight/
my souls is a bright light eclipsed by my dark life/
for everything I do right there seems to be 20 wrongs/
now my light is gone I hear the whispers of the sirens songs/
I’m lead along a path laying adjacent to death/
looking down on my self as my ancestors wept/
long kept secretes flash deep across my iris/
in a flash of light I return to life like Jesus Christ did/
I seen the crisis of my life and now I want some changes/
the dangerous life I lead only marks how deep my pain gets/

what came to be of me and my life’s sacrifices/
I took the wrong turn now I’m laying dead lifeless

Very original to the point flow..Yea I liked it

thanks for the reply,

people bitch about me only posting in the lounge but when i post opens mic they get slept on....dont bitch abuot it anymore if your going to sleep on my shit

upping for some replys

Tight drop

thanks bash thats a great reply.

WTF 6 replies and 4 are by me?

this open mic has gone to shit to many herbs here now.

im going to start rapping about how im the greatest rapper on earth and maybe ill start some battles and lable the "diss" track so i could get some replys......stop sleeping this is better then alot of the shit i read on here.

This was some good shit. Kinda of a played out topic the whole "street life" bit, but you did it well.
It had some ill vocabulary and a great flow, but multis coulda been better...
nice spit
One

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aiyo i was feelin this drop, you had an original flow and some hot lines,1

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thanks for the replys.

i only do multies if they fit in i dont like forceing them if they dont go along with what im tring to say

yeah im hating the sleepin situation,this place be a hotel right now,i dunno what happened,aqnd then you get one line replies ,like that was ill........hahahah that fuckin sesame street thing is heaps funny hahah....eat that damn kids head ahha...i liked the spit flu...

took the wrong turn now I’m laying dead lifeless/
forget the niceness my life tied with insecurity/
the purity is gone now I’m trapped in obscurity/


^^nicely put together dun...


I seek the knowledge of the great ones, somebody notice me/
it seems my depiction’s of life reflect street poetry

^^im feelin them lines righ there....


pep my open mic peice zions...if you got the time...

nice drop flu..


bismillah

thanks for the reply i returned the favor

upping over these gay ass diss tracks

upping again

lmao, good shit, but its really hard to believe it came from you, so i see u have talent and u are good at talkin shit, u good at both so keep up both of them lmao, i cant stop laughin cause u can actually spit good shit, but on da real, keep da good shit up

You rep New Mexico well.............good shit.........come with it even more next time!!