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Non Phixion - Black Helicopter

NuclearConcepts
I'm not perfect.. i wish i acted perfect..
I could tell ppl i'm not perfect, and i'm acting perfect..
i feel like i'm lacking purpose..so i stash the hurt in..
side, that why i rag on certain kids.. its like my past is turnin..
into an acid curtain.. and i'm trapped with words in..
so i try to laugh and turn it into a bunch of rapping verses..
Til the day the gats is burstin at my back and sternum..
..i tap the surgeon and ask him how that gash incerted..
Feel me but cant see me like the laughing gas is on..
Still breathe after you kill me cuz i'm past the wrath of song..
..Standin back so long.. its like my spine is bout to break..
Understand my wrongs.. but its like my rights are now mistakes..
I shout my thanks.. for my ability to free my roped in thoughts..
Hope they caught.. so people relize that i spoke whats taught..
Soaked in clocks.. but still no time to spill my mind of what i need..
Tucked beneath a comfort speech on life to help us fuckin breathe..

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As the sentence grows..with a bended flow ending those..
Who wouldn't touch me with a ten-foot pole..
Dynamic rhyme patterns inject, inflict, invent mind graphics..
I'm classic..if only someone would define average..
My fate's subjected to life's waste..
My mind's pace pressed on my page..
Up-high states get me irate..
My life's trapped in a cage..wrapped in a page of passion and rage..
I'm not so happy to say..it's back to the maze..
Of finding my heart..while the thieves fly with the stars..
And fire from afar..I'm dying in parts..
My inside is gone..what's left of my soul..
Is inside this song..You won't be crying for long..
I'm flying with haunts..dropping knowledge..
And firing taunts..I'M TIRED OF ALL YOUR TIRED RESPONSE..
I sit atop this board as the king..and admire the pawns..
As boredom rings..I'm writing the song..to explore things..
You missed in your last life..i'm past strife..i'm ready to pass knifes..
To the guts of wretched half-lifes..this is the last fight..
With black knights that act white..the records scratch when i laugh right..
While grasping the graphics of a sad life thru graphite..
And that's right..
I've passed thru hell..with my back to the ropes..
Masturbating my heart back to health without a fraction of hope..
I put listeners first..but cliques twist my words'n..
Dismiss the curtains..that i use to cloak their thoughts on what's cool or not..
I try to uplift urbans..to the sub...ground..
Love is the only emotion in me above sound..


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Why are people sleeping on this , , ,, This shit was Sick , Tha concept was Ill

Thanks, up

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Waddup again

that was fuckin ILL as hell
keep postin other shit

.....again...only receiving two line feedback comments,innit annoying??...so are sleepers...it went well with black helicopters,thats an ill ass beat...did necro do that for them??...i cant remeber wich ones he did and wich ones he didnt,anyway to the lyrics...it went definetly with the beat...i liked th euse of multies throughout,and the break in some words going on to the next line in the verse...i liked how you started the first two bars...all ending with perfect,i liked how that worked...i liked you verse more then the second,but the second was also good...

To the guts of wretched half-lifes..this is the last fight..
^^nice
With black knights that act white..the records scratch when i laugh right..
^^ i really liked this line,it was clever as fuck,and had a good meaning...loved the way it flowed and worked...


Still breathe after you kill me cuz i'm past the wrath of song..
^^^no doubt...its like eyedea said in the song music music...if you wanna live forever all you need to do is learn to sing...definetly got that line right there,i liked th eentire peice dun...keep droppin this shit,its ill....again apologizies for the lateness...been busy...fuck sleepers...its a problem that needs to be rectified....how i dont know....but yeha...keep droppin this shit,im likin it...

Thank Youuuuuuuuu.. up

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shit was nice...keep e comming

Why did you go to page 4 and pick this out to leave feedback on?

ILLness fam..
This really displayed ya skills as an emcee..
the concept was original and entertaining..
and some lines were like shiitt..

like..

To the guts of wretched half-lifes..this is the last fight..
With black knights that act white..the records scratch when i laugh right..
While grasping the graphics of a sad life thru graphite..
And that's right..
I've passed thru hell..with my back to the ropes..
Masturbating my heart back to health without a fraction of hope..

Word up..

Peace
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