I still get no props even though I’m gully when rappin’
I’m clever in lines, but you tell me my multi’s are lackin’
And you faggots are actin’ like im not better in rhymes
“Oh he doesn’t computer rap so he’ll never get signed”
But who fuckin cares, no record label will ever need you
And I don’t use cool edit cause I see how bad it treats you
Oh no I rhymed the same words, I must be losing my head
Ahh fuck it, in the next line I’ll probaly do it again
Cause if theres anything this net drama is teaching ‘us’
Its that were all “biters” or “dickryders” when someone has beef with ‘us’
Damn I shouldn’t of done that, cause even though I have an appealing wit
You guys are all looking for excuses to tell me why you aint feeling this
“Well this was okay, I’ve seen you come better and you know it dawg..
I mean you stayed on topic, great lines,.. but uhhh your flow was off”
But quit acting like you read these lines, when most of you geeks ignored it
You just do half ass responses so you can drop a link to YOUR shit
Or you see people giving me props, so you tell ‘em im hardly dope
And that I’ll never mean shit to rap until I drop an audio
But you can keep being MC imindenial, if that’s what your proud to be
And I’ll keep being MC tentimesbetterthenyou… without a beat
Just stop droppin' tracks, that’d be something educated to do
We all know you thought the movie 8 mile was dedicated to you
But it wasn’t even close, cause you’ll always fail in this rap
You can’t Reach For The Moment if your still patting yourself on the back
I know I sound like an ass, but maybe Ill show regression..
And eat these words, when I'm watching you from the nose bleed section

But till then… fuck you

is this you?

No. It isn't him. It's Fracture from UPN.

wow...sprung..................booooooooooooooooooo oooooom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Actually .. its Fracture from b-boys.

But I love it.

So I wanna see what you guys think

Fracture at UPN -is- the one from b-boys.com. He used to be T~R~E.

Sick drop homie...I like it alot...stayed on topic the whole time and u got nice vocab...like ur shit....check out mine...you'll find it...open mic....payce homie, keep it real

That was phat son!

^^did you people even read it?or what was posted after it?...its not his verse......its fractures...whoever fracture is....dont com eback tellin gme who fracture is,i couldnt care less....if you love it so much why have you posted th eentire verse in here.....in open mic....the place to display pre-writtens and freestyles whatever.....i might go put a tupac verse in here....just to see what happens....why dont you go to interaction or osmethign or reveiws an dask peopel what they think...instead of makin git look lik eyou wrote this verse and dropped it....

^You dont know Fracture?
You seriously need to visit UPN / RTM or RM, lol.

Yeah, this was dope man - i replied to it at LW i think, it got into their equivalent of an RB Legend over there. .

lmao...nope no idea...i still dont see the point of postin his verse in here though,if he wanted it here he could post it himself,and i would give it my thoguhts....

post your own shit.
no one cares about
fracture. at least i
dont. tell him to
come here. and
post himself. dont
be a message boy

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quit hatin that shit was ill

Shut.. the fuck up Sand. I wanted to see if you guys would fucking like it. He would never come to a shitty ass site like this anyways..

And you too atetrack define', how the fuck does it look like I wrote it? It clearly says -Fracture after it you fucking loser. Shut the fuck up and leave the thread.

How about you fags stop posting in here telling me i shouldn't have made this thread, and leave feedback on my other 3 pieces you for some reason passed up. Sluts.

Vortex, I know.. i'm from bboys. And.. LW = what?

lmao........if you thoguth about what i said...i ment,why are you posting thi sfracture guys shit....if your not fracture.....by posting it...you make it seem that you have written it,i didnt notice the word fracture....i saw the peie and was goign to comment....but no...you didnt write it so i wondered why you posted somethign you didnt write....thats all...dont get your panties twisted over a simple question....why havent i commented on your other shit...i havent had time....you shouldnt of made this thread....its not your peice....why is that so hard for you to figure out...make a thread with your own shit....not someone elses...im sure fracture if he wanted could come on here and post this verse...and i would comment on it...i did like it...but you didnt write it...so why would i coment to you about it.....see thats all i was saying....was a simple question....and a simple concept to understand....it didnt look like you wrote it,i just assumend you did,seeing how it is your thread...i never noticed the fracture part,i wasnt looking....thus bringing us back to the question that i stated before and have no desire of rewriting....lmao at the slut comment....thankyou....if fracture wouldnt come to a shitty ass site like this,that shis own choice,not yours....and if this is such a shitty ass site...why are you here?.........im goign to look at your peices now that youve actually written...becuase i have the time to.....why you get so heated over simple shit....pffft