Hey,this is like my 3rd openmic,and still no feedback! I would really appreciate it if ya'll could tell me whut ya'll think
THANX!!!



A yo, my styles so wraped i'll wrap you in my mic cable cord/
beat you and drag you down tha stairs of my porch/
then spit fire that lites you like a torch/
of corse/
i'll yell this shit at you till im horse/
so you think im speakin in code like morse/
when you hear my voice ya feel tha kind of force/
thats knockin ya out your porshe/
and knockin ya off off your corse/

WOW! that was short, diminutive, miniture!

weak though! gotta work on style, flow and wordplay..

keep elevatin'!

Thanx for takin the time ta read my shit!

Whack shit ,, ur battle record says it all