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Lets Go. .

i'l spit first dawg!

Vortex=

u a nigga from private skool whos pretendin hes a thug/
I’ll drop ya ass in a Jacuzzi wiv a live electric plug/
Stepping in my colleseum means u goin through complete humiliation/
U need 2 giv this shit up, n go bac 2 skool 2 get an education/
Cos if u don’t dawg u gonna continue your families tradition/
Of bein on the dole n goin through life wiv fuck all ambition/
U see ya mums biggest achievement in life is beddin me/
But she didn’t bed me I played her n now I’ve got ya house key/
So now ya life under threat from me even wen ya ass in bed/
So next time u fall asleep u won’t wake up n if u do it’l be wiv a gun 2 ya head/

Fish Licker…

It wont take meaning less tactics to overcome your level of wackness
You thought u had the World in ya Hands, when u were Holding an Atlas!
The fact is, when you lose this, you’ll be screaming “Oh, Damn!”
Your chances of beating me are Slimmer than Eminem on a weightloss program!
So scram. .leave now, don’t make me have to hurt you
Or put a shell in ur back so big, u’ll be looking like a Ninja Turtle!
Choked till ur purple, cause your just a faggot punk,
Who’s verses resemble his sig. .simple and not saying much!
Ur brain must be outta lunch, and you wonder why you aint won yet?
Cause I will never come after D unless were playing Alphabet!

FIRST OFF i cant vote BUT if i could then mine would goto VORTEX he had some WIKID pucnhes in there sorry dw ur flow was tight especially the first three lines but i thnk u were just out punched.
Peace

Please check out my first battle im anxious for some votin

MANIC vs GOLDEN GRAMZ

Yo i thought dis battle went down good. Dw had some nice punches and i have to agree wit da
cat above dat the first lines where good hits. But just slowed up abit later.
Vortex seemed to have some nice structure and some great flow.

You thought u had the World in ya Hands, when u were Holding an Atlas!

I have to say dis line was great. Liked ya style Vortex never seen ya before, but you got good shit ahead of ya.
EVEN SO DW WILL PICK UP HARD, SO NO-DESRESPECT
I just thought Vortex had some great word play...

Can yall holla at my battle with Kriminal B 'Haviour i want dat shit closed...

Much respect yall

was a decent battle, both dropped decent verses, my vote goes to VORTEX though, he came out harder, but it was close

yeh, i thought dw had sum good shit goin on. punches and flow was aight.
Vortex had a tight verse wit good flow and punches. his wordplay was good aswell.

Vote = Vortex

Vortex's drop was pretty dope...Enjoyed it, the other kids was way too simple and didn't come hard.....Hit ma battle up Vortex...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0211#post440211

There...Pz....

Vote=Vortex

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im goin to have to give this one to votex.he had a tight opening and a nice ending even tho it seemed like he was tryin to play me.his punches were on point and hit hard but his wordplay suffered.he still managed to come away with this one.

vote-vortex

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