Another quick key

I've studied history books, looked through glasses in hour as the power has fell
Dwelled on massive attacks, when flat philosophies failed.. without a reason availed
Prevailing envy in time, the climb for 'presently' best, put to rest with a bomb
Sadaams fullfilled the prophets, babylon is rebuilt, hes killed the doubters with charm
Alarms are falsely advising all of the end, sins are immense as our Savior is near
Resurrection in tears, I fear for the youth, debuted in a world where the Devil's adhered
Engineering religions that history killed, the real reason were here is to finish a test
Yet the fiction is stressed, false prophets in dress, wearin iced chains hiding truth in the chest
Suggestions arise, comprise a varied religion so sinning is fine, just repent in time
But God is the one that creatd our lives, his returning unknown, so dont bother to hurry, there is no time!

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This was tight ,, , Had sick wordplay , ,, , but dont type ur drops in paragraph form , , thats tha only thing whack bout u right now , ,

Well I wrote it listening to Az - Sosa so I spit it alloud to a flow *shrugs*

Thanks for the words homie.

this is good content...
like i have told many
before. seperate your
bars. and make them
shorter..content was
good. flow was hard
to get because of bar
length...

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that was pretty tight i agree about the formattin but hey its only open mike.. w/o the formattin its a little harder to catch tho flow but once i got it it was great

lmao.....the bars was a bit long,but so are mine so i didnt really care...liked it skyrpted,i was gonna write more but,yeah,im just not in the mood to write heaps...liked the ice chain truth chest thing,that was cool....keep writing.


^^lmao at the...hey its only open mic....dunno why though.

Thanks all.

Uppin for a last round.