i understand you want the best-of-me, but if this is all i got what more can you expect-of-me//
if i were to fail would you think any less-of-me, go ahead ignore the rest-of-me//
you shit on me with the best-of-ease,what are you done-with-me?//
why not come-with-me,so please be with-me-god//
cuz i've been hit with these fifty-shots,i try'd to swiftly-dodge//

uppen

fattaly yours

not too bad. shoulda been longer. nice multis though. keep spittin

This was whack

you rhymed me 8 times. and this was only five line long. sorry but i have to say this was wack and you have to elevate.

im not hating its just my opinion and im sure everyone agrees with me.

i think you were tring to be deep but you failed. if you want to see how a piece like this is suposed to be done go read my open mc " the knowlege" and leave some feedback

this is bullshit...
dont post this
in open mic...
go to the
cypher area
for this

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but its not a cypher its a keystyle a little one but a keystyle none the less