Day and night I find neither rest nor peace. When I sleep, I am disturbed by tormenting dreams in which I see you, always severe, always grave, always incensed against me. Forgive me then, if I adopt the course of writing to you again.. How can I endure life if I make no effort to ease its sufferings..

Now all is gone... All over with and done. Notwithstanding, I’m still here in front of you..

Eventhough you might be the most abstrusive person in the world, that I could no longer keep track of the logic of each event coming before me, and eventhough you’ve been such a diabolic element to my ego, not even the thought of turning my back on you has ever walked before me.. Not even once. Please don’t ask why, cause I’ve been asking too. Yes, a lot of times. But due to unfortunate circumstances, the answer I’ve been desperately looking for has been interminably imperceptible.

Now my eyes are dry from all the tears I’ve shed. My vision has been locked in this whirlpool of fire- leaving a movie playing in my eyes.. Flaming, flickering and burning throughout my whole vital force, as it covers the measly space where bright radiance should supposedly enter, and that of which I am unable to see. My mind, poisoned with inevitable parathion, has been too unwelcoming towards every gleam of light. My frivolous heart, tired of running and running around in circles..... following you..... chasing you..... grasping for you..... catching you..... guiding you..... comforting you.....

Different shades of every hue flash across my eyes. The beat of every sound enters my ear. Yet all I can see is you. I see no color, not even black nor white. All I can hear is your voice. I hear no tone, I hear no noise.

Doors inside my head have been bolted from within. Yet every drop of flame still made its way through.. They’ve lit millions of candles. They’ve built a path of light. And since I thought it was the only way to get out of this dark hole I’m in, I followed it. I climbed to the light, I walked the distance, I followed the trail. I did arrive at the other side. I did reach the end of the pathway. But what else could I possibly do? To my surprise, it only led me back to you..

I tried to recede, I tried to move away. I looked back but--But the candles were no longer visible....

Now the candles are gone.

There is no more light….

Bleakness has taken its place before me for the nth time.

And all I can see..
..is your face.


sorry bout the paragraph form....just tell me honestly..what u think...

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- Tampons are still expensive -
- That's a Fact - </center>

The chick above me is boring and dumb,
Be useful for a second, open your mouth for some cum
You need some Karate lessons so go to China,
Oh and by the way, stop whining and pull the pop-sicle stick out your vagina!!

^ You are a moron. Your first posts are going to be hate posts on other peoples work? I can see you are going to be a great RB member.. idiot. If you didn't like her shit, thats fine.. just tell her what you didn't like.. and be helpful. Posting this shit is retarted and makes yourself look bad. And why the fuck did you make 3 names within a few days of eachother ( bignick, Street_Sweepa, Tech_N9ne)? Fuckin herbs.. -The End

^^BITCH

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<br><br><center>- Shiznit -
- Tampons are still expensive -
- That's a Fact - </center>

I've been posting a lot of responses on here lately so I hope every post I make doesn't get annoying with the same (this was a good post) thing. But, this was a good post, which is not suprising.

The style of it was different. I've been reading a lot of peoples writings on here the past few days and been seeing different styles that I've liked, this is one of them.

"Day and night I find neither rest nor peace. When I sleep, I am disturbed by tormenting dreams in which I see you, always severe, always grave, always incensed against me. Forgive me then, if I adopt the course of writing to you again.. How can I endure life if I make no effort to ease its sufferings.. "

I liked the beginning of it the most just because that's where it grabbed my attention. Then it continued to get better there on out. Another good piece from you Keep them coming..

we aren't the same person dumbfuck

Hi there, I'd like to same I'm sorry,
Sorry trick, I shoulda stuck to playin Atari
Looks likes the mods hate me now too,
Maybe I should cry like a bitch just like you
No. that wouldn't help anything at all,
I guess I'll just sit here and ball till I fall
Moron? I'm smarter than the average bear,
Stop editing my posts queer, Or I'll run you over in my John Deere

this guys shit is fun

I'll up this for you since you got a bunch of idiots posting in your thread and didn't get a good response

Umm...Brandon...Ban All 3
Of These Idiotic Alias's...

Shiz...Don't keep making
those hateful remarks
towards me...i see them...
don't think i don't...this
writing was good, if it wasn't
for all of the subliminally
encoding insults on myself...

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you must have gone through alot to have to always see this persons face and have this person on ya mind all tha time......well hey i really liked tha way u wrote this..u expressed yaself very nicely on here and it was pretty interesting...keep up tha goodwork!..pz

true that true that^
holmes....the end is near



^ that'z WorD! ^

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*scratches head* for the second time....im gonna pretend i know what u talkin bout....

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<br><br><center>- Shiznit -
- Tampons are still expensive -
- That's a Fact - </center>

****Confused i cam here to check out a poem...***

**seee Imputent ppl talkin Shit****.......................

SHiz..........nice Poem...............Loved the contend bit simplistic but had a good point nice drop

"^^^I dont give out no compliments.....am feelin good 2nite"..lol

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Good piece, Different style but good piece
a nice poem.........

ruth...yeah i know i posted this awhile back...so yeah those shitheads messed up my thread so it went down...but thanks glad ya like it...

add...much appreaciated thanks...


and to sand...im still clueless bout what u talking bout...hahahha

but anyways..thanks yall

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<br><br><center>- Shiznit -
- Tampons are still expensive -
- That's a Fact - </center>