Ohh Mann

Breathing in the evening is luckily a common occurance..
But the reason to keep going is spotted at the shock of tha purpose..
to try and lock the spot at the top and get furnished.. its what we dream..
being stopped by the furnace of evil who had gotten stuck beneath..
the humming beast we usually like to call the rock floor..
Before i knocked four times, life made sure i was knocking on a locked door..
Slept.. to dream my future up but only got a foggy nightmare..
My shadows in black fighting trying to fix the awful white tares..
Try to fight tears for' i'm suddenly upon the lime glare..
Climb up the right stairs.. before i fall down and see the hype stares..
Saw a glimpse of success.. and obviously tried to fit in with the rest..
started falling right there, the circling stars showed the eclipse of whats next..


DUN DUN DUN..... and this is where I stopped.

Hey.

i liked it nuclear....it was real deep,it would sound ill over a nice slow beat,with you droppin git fairly slowly nahmean...i liked the line about tappin onthe rock four times,that was a good one.started falling right there....<nice...the circling stars showing an eclipse of whats next...<nice imagery...nice imagery all through the peice...had a good topic.got me thinkin about what it was about..but igot it by the end...nice spit nuke....was short thoguh...but sweet...would be ill as a long drop i think...keep droppin..

apologize for ht elateness in replies...been busy.

Yeah thanks.. I just keyed this up and had nothing else to spit so i stopped.

This was Ill nuclear , , Deep shit.........Nice content..............It would be an Ill audio wit a Slow Beat..............Return da favour http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=48119

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