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Old 05-19-03, 09:16 PM   #1
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"So What" .. my most heartfelt piece so far, please look.

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'So What' -- Mic Booth


So what... that sound you make is bound to break
..I found that hate is old love surrounding fate
So what... Its over because of a little boredom?
Four months were stored up just to tell me that your done?
You poor slut...
So what? Its like nothing happened and now you ignore me?
Its ok if YOUR boring I still want you to be my shorty.. Its corny I know
..so what, you tore me to pieces
And the more that I'm thinkin I coulda swore I was speechless
The minute I saw you, the second our mind and eyes met
Those blue pearls that couldve outshined a diamond
All your teases and flirts, got me in trouble in class
Feelings I couldnt speak of in words, I fell in love with you fast
So what.. for a year we talked each night all alone
The best conversations, then fell asleep right on the phone
So what, a first love, I'd always boast in the mirror
Forgot shes been with someone else for most of the year
But I got her, So what... I was betraying my best friend
I then relized I was opening a gate to a dead end
So what, I walked through, I know he hated me much
But Me and my girlfriend still had the greatest 3 months
We'd see each other all the time, dates night and day
So what if that all quickly went down a flight of drains
How could you even imagine of doing the cliche of the slutty
I wanted you tortured but to still say that you loved me
So what if I wanted to set fire to the carpet, quick
So I could burn in the words I ever spoke to this heartless bitch.
3 years later, and my hearts still trapped in a cageish cubicle
Like I dont deserve to sit across from you and say your beautiful
...See you in the hallways and we barely speak
You look so happy, but my hearts still very weak..
So what, I hate you.. and I havent dropped a tear
So what, I love you.. I havent stopped for years.

Whew. Finally.
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Old 05-19-03, 10:06 PM   #2
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Old 05-19-03, 10:08 PM   #3
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oooooooo deep emotional drop .. . I was feelin it dawg.......Overall u get a 8/10 , , , return da favour http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=48317
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Old 05-19-03, 11:25 PM   #4
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OOOOOOOOOOOOO
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Old 05-19-03, 11:31 PM   #5
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Old 05-19-03, 11:53 PM   #6
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why do you people post and come to this shit???
this is a battle site
not a pussy site
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Old 05-20-03, 12:01 AM   #7
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its aight rhyme... but what the fuck man its just a bitch... stop being such a pussy
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Old 05-20-03, 12:02 AM   #8
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Slut, fuck you immature faggots.

I hope you die of fucking a bitch with AIDS, seriously.

"Its just a bitch" Fuck You.
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Old 05-20-03, 12:36 AM   #9
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U niggaz dumb , , so wats wrong wit some1 making a soft drop to their girl , , , ,I do dat..................
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Old 05-20-03, 05:18 AM   #10
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fuck them fools that think this shits stupid....one of the hardest things to write is some shit like this...its fuckign difficult,if they ever had girlfriends they might understand,but guys dont like poetry written to them,so they lucked out i guess.....this was welll written nuclear,fuck them fools got no idea what they talkin...least you do somethign different then most cats,its good to see shit like this...the ending was nice,the i hate i love you thing,thats was good...and the part about sitting across from her and not being able to say nothign,know what you mean,unlike them fools above that dont understand,they still dealin with puberty....faggots.
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Old 05-20-03, 10:57 AM   #11
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This joint was aight... didn't grab my attention all that much. It had some nice punches and wordplay though.
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Old 05-20-03, 11:48 AM   #12
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punches??its a damn verse about a girl,and what happened between them...it has no use of punches??its not a battle rap...what?
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Old 05-20-03, 02:50 PM   #13
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Yeah that was the worst reply I've ever seen

Punches and wordplay in a topical about a girl

Fucking itio
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Old 05-20-03, 02:54 PM   #14
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It's cause Enigmatic knows shit about rap, he puts words together and pretends to hispanic cause he wants to kill himself lol
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Old 05-20-03, 04:40 PM   #15
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With my tongue inside a nun
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