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Old 05-19-03, 10:27 PM   #1
Ecliptic
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somethin i wrote quick

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As i penetrate ur skull through the forces of telepathy/
my mind generates thoughts that travel through ur blood stream/
u open up ur eyes u livin my life now/
ur soul has been chosen to fight on the highest grounds/
A military seargent is waiting at the gates/
givin u a number, ur mind is in a state of confusion/
ur thinkin this is an illlusion/
ur lifes clock was cut short like a bombs diffusion/
now ur duckin under bullets stayin clear away from mines/
angel spill a liquid killlin what was once sunrise and the oceans tides, the whole world is at a stand still/
ur chasin after shadows in this land is kill or be killed/
ur made to kill, the word emotion has no meaning/
missles touching down spreading sickness through the region/
armed wit every evil force the earths rotation changes course/
from out the sky galactic wars/
a fallen star shows no remorse
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Old 05-19-03, 11:45 PM   #2
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telepathy/
my mind generates thoughts that travel through ur blood stream//that doesnt rhyme

this had no meaning.....alrite vocab meta n multies...........u should spit about a topic.......alrite for a newbie
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Old 05-19-03, 11:46 PM   #3
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Yeah i kno , ,this was aight for a newbie.............return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48317
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Old 05-19-03, 11:47 PM   #4
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he said it was a qiuck rhyme... but yeah not bad.
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