yur rules, should know em..... dont feed !

here........g'luck homie....and i dont feed......>>>
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aight.... checkin in, goin now..............

im glad you dont.............................................. .................................

Aight…….this losing streak is bullshit…..lets go…….

“mic check” couldn’t check a mic even if he was a working mic [repairmen]/

I’ll spare him his life for apparent -reasons- that even my –weak- shit [scares him]/

“chrit” or MC who should I kill now its really kind of a [hard decision]/

I spit “precise” and with “desire” with this rap shit cuz that’s my [hearts precision]/

You must be [crazy kid] you couldn’t succeed in landing punches if yo bitch ass [paid me diss]/

This guy trys to “put me down” oh I know why he don’t “believe” in me he must be [Atheist]/

I knew I was gonna kill you I just didn’t wanna be so fuckin [rude when I done it]/

Cuz you beaten me is like a anorexic bitch keeping her [food in her stomach]/

I’ve been [sworn too ill] but I [sworm you still] you with words to “murder” cuz my ass was [“born to kill”]/

I’m the lyrical police I [arrest you man] only the [best advance] I spit “ill” now you dyin of “cancer” similar to bitches with [chest implants]/

Yo look like this guy aint gonna post so I guess I’ll have to [post first]/

Your punches [wont hurt] like eaten dinner than getting desert and choking on [yogurt]/

your skills are like “plums” in winter they aint [rype yet] I shouldn’t of [typed yet]/

I’ll take the “microphone” and start to hit you with it that’s your only fuckin [mic check]/

Just a key man………nuthin really special….

check my battle vs shockthaworld and i will hit dis up when you guys are done
holla
lilsmokey~~~~~~* out

Ayo after this RAPPING-FIGHT I'm stealing the "first amendment", so I know I'm walking away with the "BRAGGING-RIGHTS"//
Cause Truest like "porno vets" in "virgin roles", he's only "ACTING-TIGHT"//
Not a single soul will come to your "wake" after I SHRED-YOUR-ORGANS, cause "kids sleep on you" like you rest on a single bed with SEVEN-"ORPHANS"//
There's no chance of my "ankles and LEGS-DEVORCING", cause "de feetin' me" is like getting a blow job from the HEADLESS-HORSEMEN//
Mic's the rawest alive, with chords in his wrist and two mics in the PLACE-OF-FISTS, my existence alone will replace the faith of an ATHEIST//
God's a SATANIST, after this AMAZING-DISS you'll need an AIDS-ASSIST just to TAKE-A-PISS//
"Kurt Cobain" takes me in "vain" cause even God CALLS-ME-DOPE, write the RAWEST-JOKES that put kids in such an AWE-OF-QUOTES that when they come to their JAWS-ARE-BROKE//
If you wanna BRAWL-WITH-FLOWS you'll get hit from "all directions" when ATTACKING-ME, cause Emceez who "front" get "left" "right" in "BACK"-OF-ME//
You're WACK-TO-ME, you see Check's challenges? Smart foes REFUSE-THOSE, cause now Rapbattles knows that battling me is a "grave error" like "mis-spelling TOMB-STONES"//
It seems you're not afraid of my FLOW-SO I guess it was a coincidence that our next battle will result in your !!only!! NO-SHOW//
The SICKEST-OF-ARTISTS, not into "stealing roles", but I'll "RIP-YOU-A-PART"-BITCH//
I'm not "feeling your flow", but I'll throw a "FIST-IN-YOUR-HEART-QUICK", get inside your soul and start DISSING-YOUR-HARDSHIPS//
Mangling ankles and DEFEATING-MY-TARGETS, use sun glasses to STREAM-YOUR-APARTMENT, cause you're fucking with an Emcee so bright he doesn't even know what the MEANING-OF-DARK-IS//

quick 13 line keystyle...nah mean ?


Vicious Determination
-MiC ChEcK

vote mic check

i liked his verse, it had better multis and punches, tha truests verse flowed abit better but just didn't hit as hard as mic's did in my eyes.. good battle guys,

vote on this please: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48644

don't let my vote sway your votes towards my opponent, vote fairly guys.

oh well.. i'd vote in the poll but i need 100 posts.. i've left my thoughts now anyway, it always helps to have someone elses opinion.

Man...

I feel for ya, Truest...
I do...
Look at my freakin record.
But ya lost again, dude...

Mic Check

__________________
Merkings will occur Monday thru Friday, 8 am thru 5 pm, C.S.T.
For my convenience, not yours!

mic check got this one in my opinion. I can say one thing punches were a tie but rthe truest crushed my man in multis and i gotta give u that cuz

fave lines

I’ll spare him his life for apparent -reasons- that even my –weak- shit [scares him]/

Cuz you beaten me is like a anorexic bitch keeping her [food in her stomach]/

kinda played but u know still hot

I’ve been [sworn too ill] but I [sworm you still] you with words to “murder” cuz my ass was [“born to kill”]/

i like the creativity in that and the structure real ill

other comments
u keep on doin ya thing man looks like u bout to be 0-6 but u know just keep on practicin. Just get in the mirror and freestyle and eventually it'll make ya text a whole lot better. Read a lot more and when u have nothin to do just start takin words outta the dictionary and use em in a rhyme enhance ya vocab but u nice just keep elevatin.

mic check ill as usual always keepin the flow hot.

favorite lines

There's no chance of my "ankles and LEGS-DEVORCING", cause "de feetin' me" is like getting a blow job from the HEADLESS-HORSEMEN//

funny shit right there like the multis

Cause Truest like "porno vets" in "virgin roles", he's only "ACTING-TIGHT"//

if the rest of ya shit was wack this wouldve taken it im sorry.

The SICKEST-OF-ARTISTS, not into "stealing roles", but I'll "RIP-YOU-A-PART"-BITCH//
I'm not "feeling your flow", but I'll throw a "FIST-IN-YOUR-HEART-QUICK", get inside your soul and start DISSING-YOUR-HARDSHIPS//

real cretivity int hat flow i really enjoyed it

othercomments
in my opinion u r one of the best on rb. U wouldnt be the first choice for someone to battle up here. and honestly if u ask me besides the few cats(that u fit right in with) theres no competition up here for you. Good battle flow

Breakdown

multis-damn near tie but-mic check
punches-mic check
disses-tie
wordplay-tie
structure-mic check
flow-mic check
originality-mic check
metas-mic check
style-mic check

my vote mic check


great battle overall _1

thanx intent, im flattered...lol

uppin on this muh fucka !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

VOTE MIC CHECK.......PUNCHES LANDED NICELY.....DISSES HIT HARDER...BETTA OVERALL.....

TRUEST WORK ON MAKIN PUNCHES BETTA....NICE FLOW BUT JUST DID'NT COME AS HARD......

VOTE MIC CHECK!

Hit up that battle wit Hurrikane (pay attention to the lyrics and not the posts cuz i think it was evenly matched unlike the posts' read lol just vote and tell me wut u think) and in 10 posts i'll hit you back wit a vote -one

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...?threadid=48377

my vote goes to................. mic check better pucnches and better flow..... hit mine up..return the favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48291

Hands down...Mic Check...just all around ill. nice punchlines, flow, lyrics, metas overall great job... I'll squash this battle makin Mic Check the winner 5-0 KO...nice

Hit up this battle if anyone gets tha chance, thanks and good job -one

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...?threadid=48377