10-15 lines
u should
know the rest
of the rules
u spit first
may the best rap win
Peace

tha crime u committing is premeditated rhymes/
cause this nigga sayin he freestylin but just spitten written lines/
only way ya shit will eva be hot if i hit ya dome wit a shell from tha 9/
so it can incubate ya mind/
or i can hit ya wit tha sawed off/
and have ya dismembered parts of ya body lookin like they been sawed off/
layin ya body on tha pavement wit separate outlines for ya head 2 ya feet/
this is the only way u will be able 2 embrace tha streets/
this nigga just mad because the only heatta he got comes equipped wit kerosene/
tell niggas tha truth i hit once in ya right leg and twice in tha left thats y when walk u got that GANGSTA LEAN/
tha shit u got yaself in even god can't help u cause u can go 2 chruch all day sunday/
and end up burnin in hell by mid day monday/
u think u tha shit cause ya vocab is slightly more complex/
but i don't need big words, i got big guns that will leave ya chest that was once concave convex/

holla

alright, cool. drop yo shit ace and i'll vote. but return tha favor

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48648 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48651 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=49464
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=49145
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48739

not bad
now its my turn
ill spit back in a minute
Peace out
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sorry about that dog
I had another battle to finish
I'll try to spit back as soon as
possible
Peace
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Lets do this

"Play ball!" cried the umpire as he went behind the plate and sat
"Boo!" cried the crowd cause the hot one was up to bat
"Oh No! Its the white boy who thinks he can rap," I said.
Yeah well after three years of sriking out you'd think he'd be dead
The catcher had the ball in his mit when the hot one tried to swing
Its like a bird trying to fly, without his right and left wing
The hot one playing baseball is sort of like how he tries to rap
He couldn't run the bases if he had it drawn on a map
He's the one to call if u want the crowd to get up and leave
How much people hate him? Hell u wouldn't believe
I don't have enough fingers to calculate a number that high
Its probably near infinite so I won't even try
Man im tired of rapping and making kids like you cry
Im about ready to wrap this up because the bell already rang
For you this game is over, cause the fat lady just sang


Peace

Can't vote..........the whole post bullshit..........but I would give this to hot one..............just more vocab..........Ace. kid it was original but story tellin just don't work with battles. Still decent drop.....Keep both ya heads up and holla if you wanna battle........and Vote on my battle with Pax-Knight.......we only got one damn vote wtf!

cmon dogs
i need some votes on this
hit this battle and i'll hit ur's back
peace
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Ok, ACE OF SPADES HAD THIS, I was readin HOTs and I just got bored and went to spades and this CRACKED ME up
that was the funniest LINe
He's the one to call if u want the crowd to get up and leave/ <<<
How much people hate him? Hell u wouldn't believe/
vote = ace of spades
yo, hit my battle wit $pook$

thanks dog
uppin for more votes dogs
Peace
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yo dogs
uppin for votes
hit this and ill try to hit
u back
Peace
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yo ace that was sum hilarious sh*t! nice formating with the rap story
Some o' hots lines don't make sense, like the third one
wtf?
If I could vote, Ace would have it

Peace
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Be sure to check my battle w/ Young Brown
we're lookin' for votes on it

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Tha Break Down....

hot one - not bad, not badd i liked this line...t

ha shit u got yaself in even god can't help u cause u can go 2 chruch all day sunday/
and end up burnin in hell by mid day monday/

That was ill, but unfortunetly that was that only thing, i sought
to be ill. Nice effort none the less

Ace - what can i say ? that shit was ILL. I liked how
you formatted that shit into somewhat of a topic.
nice punches and wordplay.

vote - Ace of Spades

thanks
dog, i need some more
votes peeps
hit this and i'll hit ur battles
back
Peace
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