Check in's by Sunday
Verses by Tuesday
Voting ends Thursday

Topic...
The state of the union

__________________

Checking in,

Good Luck to you.

__________________

all great playin the freaking mod lol well lets see how good i can do

Mad man what the hell is the state of the union

It's the address that the President
gives talking about the country.

__________________

Tom: Mad Man is approaching the senate chambers right now, where he is about to give the state of the union address.
Diane: What is that I hear in the background Tom?
Tom: Oh shit Diane! Mad Man is laying this shit down!

Yo the state of the union is a fucking disgrace
Bombing Iraqi's, this isn't our place
To try and take over the world, and be the baby sitter. <---(watch over the world)
Yeah someone else tryed that once, his name was Hitler
I can't beleve we think that we're the holy ones
'God is on our side', that's why we drop the bombs
INjustice is the only thing we preach, we're theGOD's of that
WE're the only one's, TRUST me, who die from being too fat
We think we're bad ass, Well we are an Empire and all
But just like those before us, every Empire does fall
Tax cuts to help the rich, that shit is fuckin' wack
Caring about havin' more while people still live in burlap sacks
The state of the union is one of shame and lies
Gotta lower the price of oil even if the people die
If Bush gets re-elected, I swear I'll fucking leave
Pack up my sniping rifle so Bush'll no longer breathe
So to these divided states of embarrasment I raise a middle finger, no make it two
Pack up my bags for Canada, and yell a big "FUCK YOU!"
That's the state of the union it's right there for all to see
It's up to the kids of tomarrow, to see where America leads...

__________________

OHHHHHHHHHH fuckin ill drop dawg

.................................................. ............
...........................
.................................................. ......

ya opinions was herd

yo Mad Man that was an ill drop but look
Im going to call it right now no matter how much you rhyme is better then mine no Warlords can vote iight.

here it is


The state of the Union is tired of getting complains from its own citizens on how they run their country.
Mr. President has elected Will’Con to finally get things straight.
Ahemm excuse me all you fucking citizens of America listen up

Will’Con here to finally lay this out./
Listenin to these lil bitches whine and pout./
Go ahead protest your opinion and complain about the union's situation./
But there hasn't been a better decision since the Emancipation Proclamation./
For a second now let's put you in some new shoes./
And inform your ignorant Asses in on some real news./
Try being from New England miles from the Trade./
Or in Kuwait beggin anyone for some medical aid./
How about the mother of a troop hoping her son still has his fucking head./
Or a citizen from Iraq wishing they could be fuckin dead./
Get through communism and try to keep your fucking home./
While Sadaam has toilets fuckin made of gold and chrome./
Yeah, the situations seems wack from the sidelines./
How about you take a different point of view for some good time./
And be able to stand up and still diss the red white and blue./
Take on one of the government identities and lets see what the fuck would you do./
Be the speaker of the Union give your speech and hear the whole fucking crowd boo./
Or the President who each day is faced with another threat from somebody trying to take over this Planet./
People like us got a house, we got jobs, we are kept safe, and yall want to say our leader is doing a bad job, just remember a life our friends in Iraq and never take America for granite./

there it is yall

this is not an official vote b/c i am a warlord , but i think mad man took this one ... but i am not poll voting .....
.................
.................................................. ...

gotta say mad man wiped the floor on this one.....no disrespect to Will'con
both stayed to the topic so even on that.....but i thought mad man expressed his view on it better and voiced his opinion better and more aggresive
Will had the upper on vocab
Word play.....wasn't much but mad man took that with the in god we trsut line
Creativity.....neither was more creative than the other imo....but both good verses
Voting for mad man

You cannot be serious if you think that Bush is doing a good job. All this shit is just so he can get re-elected. Fuck, we're about to go to war with Iran because they harbored the man that did the May 18th bombings. Well why doesn't someone go to war with us for harboring the mafia. Those who live in glass houses shouldn't throw stones. And the U.S. is fucking hurling boulders.

__________________

Bush is a fuckin nut case................
it's amzingg how many people don't realise that....strangely it's also mostly americans....coincidence???????

hey i havent been following up on what bush is doing so I wouldnt know i just felt like writing that but some of the shit he does I do think is bull shit so I agree with you.

hey Mad Man mite of took it but I think this was a pretty hard topic to rap to.


dg
dg
fsd
gdf
g
df

vote= mad man
I felt that this was close, based on verse quality because I was feeling Will'Con's flow more than mad's.
Both had a message, however corrupt and unsupported Will's was, he still made a good point.
You said that the US was just trying to help disadvantaged people, but they started off saying the war was about "Weapons of Mass Destruction". Why not go after North Korea then? Saddam didn't have them, and NK was waving their hands saying "ooh ohh, look at our chemicals!". Thats why I think Bush is full of shit.
And Mad Man, come to Canada, we need some ill emcees up here...(even though we have a few already)
Peace

__________________
Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis