i did a reggae version to "Buss Ya Guns Inna Di Air", let me kno which one yall like betta.

Badman Business

wut shud i do? reggae/rappin? or jus rappin? or maybe mix it up?

let me kno wut yall think.

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yea .

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no doubt

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of course... so wut yall think bout it?

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yea dogs good lookin on the feedback.

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stand up dogs

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Look......lemme speak Jamaican so u'll definetely know what Im saying




Look bossman, peeped ur rap version an yu reggae version........ah nuh really rap iz de fault nor reggae.........jus' ur delivery....see me?

work on dat and ya flow......and yu criss.......zeen?




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get a better mic
production is too lowd , makes me not want to lissen but its iight
a better flow would be better
lyriks is nice tho teh masterbation line was str8

return the favor n reply to mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=51281

good lookin dogs, anyone else?

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flow was way off

accent messes up a lot

content wasnt bad..


needs a lot a work.

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dont like this

i have tightened the noose
but your heads screwed on too loose
back up before you get jacked up
with me and my crew its all hands on deck
we'll snap ya neck!!!!!!!

yea good lookin on the feedback family

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you don't sound like u from da JA.. u sound like u british try'n-a be island.. it a a'ight song, lyrics is on point.. u ain't no marley, hell u ain't no sean paul.. an' he's wack .. but i think it more your quality.. i heard better raps from u.. stick to that.. 1

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yea i guess i been in jerzey for too long, its only been 3 years tho, but yea maybe if i find some jamaican people to talk to itll come back lol, good lookin on the feedback tho.

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