aight this ones called happy..although im not happy at tha moment i thought i'd post it...

Happiness has finally come
Prevailed through all the pain
Finally the sun has come
Prevailed over all the rain

Life is good
I’m loving it more everyday
However it’s not stopping
But getting better in everyway

After a long dark period
Finally found what I’ve been searching for
Great friends, great family
And much much more

I ampast all the darkness
And can only see light
Past all the frowning
And can only smile bright

Finally at peace with myself
Something which my heart has yearned
But it didn’tcome with ease
Or without lessons learned

There’s no point in dwelling in the past
I earn nothing from it
Although I can’t change it
I can certainly learn from it

So as I continue life without him
I can never forget the past
I’ve learned from his mistakes
I’m at peace with him at last

I know what he did was wrong
And I look at all the nights I cried
Nights where tears forever streamed my face
Trying my best to hide

I hid my feelings during the day
And at night I let it all go
During the day I smiled
And at night I let the tears flow

He created an emptiness in my heart
One of nothing but a whole
He caused me nothing but trouble
And left me with pain I couldn’t console

Because of him I was never atpeace
Rather always split in two
Nothing could fix it
At least nothing anyone else could do

Now there are no tears
None to be seen from my eyes
No more sleepless nights
No more helpless cries

No longer will I feel incomplete
Now longer will I ask myself why
No longer will I wish he was here
No longer will I cry

I’m smarter because of it
I’m stronger because of the past
All those endless nights
Are finally gone at last

Now I’m whole again
Realizing I’m better than he
Now I feel no emptiness
Realizing I don’t need him to be
Happy

its longer than i usually write but i had alot to say..neways tell me watchall think..again its not one of my best peices but jus holla

Hey...I thought it was real nice...You can really express your feelings through poetry..Thats a gift

It's pretty tight. I'm feeling it thought because there was times in my life I was happy and figured everything will be smooth sailing. But then life goes on and you stop being happy. Keep dropping.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

thnx for tha luv twiztid and necromancer. much appreciated. uppin

WOW that was really good, was really feelin it. You had alot to say and I like the ending =)