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Old 05-25-03, 12:53 AM   #1
PleDge
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a journey witout a destination

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the journey takes much time and pratice
searching for a destination but you dont kno where it is
obsticles meet you on your way to completion
but somehow you over come them, and complete them
yall might meet people who you just dont agree wit
bust on their ass or just learn to deal wit it
its they way the waters of life flow
no one knows where theyre river will go
or how it will end, but the truth is out there
and in here, in your heart it hold the answers
i suppose your journeys searchin for the key but youll find it
jsut whatever you do keep going..dont you dare quit
ever had a dream where you runnin but cant reach sumtin
thats the answers but you gotta realise that theyre coming
soon, youll find them and then when you do
youll realise the answers were allways there, right next to you
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Old 05-25-03, 01:04 AM   #2
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not bad tha flow was a bit choppy deep meaning but its a played topic although u were on point it just didnt seem like u tried
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Old 05-25-03, 01:06 AM   #3
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wuz tired...kwick one befo a head out
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Old 05-25-03, 01:07 AM   #4
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nice lil drop. i like the topic but i couldn't catch the flow. but it was nice

could you peep out my shit? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=50054...thanks
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Old 05-25-03, 01:09 AM   #5
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nice one gurl
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Old 05-25-03, 02:02 AM   #6
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Too short , but it was still Ill
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