...but so what just judge the lyrics and give me some honest feed bac, thanx

v1]
yo lately it seems everyones been so pessimistic/
but me ive got reasons to remain optimistic/
i know that im gonna make it that i can survive/
and i know i couldnt have done it witout u in my live/
still not everything is well or even or all right/
cuz everyday is another challenge, a struggle, or fight/
these are hard times theres no doubt about it/
its not fun having to put up wit all of this shit/
see we may trip, falter and fall/
but together we can conquer all/
now i know, now i can see/
just how much ur lovin really means to me/

[chorus]
just know that ur loving is appreciated/
and that ill always remain dedicated/
remember that no matter what shit happens in the hood/
as long as we got eachother itll be all good/

[v2]
i have been put in a position to be hated upon/
day after day nite after nite the shit just goes on & on/
i had this anger inside me that rages like a fire/
and as these fags continuly push me the flames just get higher/
this is a worlds a fucked up place this day in age/
thats what got me in this fit of rage/
but then i realize that u love me/
and its like the hate and anger goes away completely/
cuz when we chill something about u just puts me at ease/
and i love tthe way you play hard to get when u tease/
baby girl i put u above all the rest/
becuz the way that u love is the very best/

[chorus]

[v3]
my life has been hard, yeah been rough/
just tryin to get by has always been tough/
i have had to distance my self, trustin noone/
constantly watchin my back, it was no fun/
but in u ive finally found someone whos absolutely faithful/
the comfort u provide me gives me reasons to be thankful/
no words can really describe the way u make me feel/
cuz i know that i dont deserve ur lovin and ur sex appeal/
as long as we a couple we got it going on together/
and because of this i will always love you, forever/
when it comes down to it ur above/
cuz ur the only one that ill ever love/

[chorus]

[v4]
i know that im not the only living this hard time/
but know as long as we together itll be just fine/
for the rest of my life, no matter what i do/
just know that ill always be here for u/
baby girl in me u can trust wit out hesitation/
cuz being together is enough in itself, instant gratification/
thts y I took the time to write this, cuz of ur dedication/
and u got me loving u without reservation/
girl uve got me wrapped up in ur lovin and genorsity/
no longer do i feel the hate and the anger inside me, only pity/
for those who dont share the love that we do/
just know that for what its worth ill always love u/

[chorus]

yo lately it seems everyones been so pessimistic/
but me ive got reasons to remain optimistic/
i know that im gonna make it that i can survive/
and i know i couldnt have done it witout u in my live/
thst first bit was tght

ya lost it in the middle somwhere but ya gt it back....nice drop

tahnx man

I liked this alot........Ill piece..............Return da favour http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...4458#post464458

uppin one last time

aight upping again

That is some hard shit. Since youve taken the time to read my shit I will read yours. That is a nice drop. Good Vocab use and yo gril should love it. I think that you got alot of talent and will be doin some hard shit in da future. You should start battlein dawg.

Anyway good drop.

holla at yo boy
~ShEmY~

i do battle check it out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50272

Aight fo sho. I gotta talk to you bout somtin. IM gonna Private Messange you aight?

got it man i sent u a pm bac

This shit was very tight. very nice dawg. enjoyed readin it. Keep elevatin. Peace!