Yo when i was lil my motha always told me to stay away form alcohol and drugs//
i didn't listen to her so i became a thug//
I never ment to go lighting houses on fire//
Tha was only my friends desire//
I say please sir ill pay for the repaires//
it ends up it was the maror//
I spent 3 months in jail//
untill my pop's paid the bail//
I said i wont do that crap//
but i lied when i said that//
I got booted out the house//
like i was a fucking nuscence of a mouse//
Its 3 am i walk the streets//
I get nothin but beats//
I now sleep in cold wet sheets//
A met a person//
all she was doin was cursin//
I tapped it twice//
like white rice//
I straighten out my life by the year 2007//
hopin i still got a chance to make it to heaven//
I confess my sins//
Hopin my privet paradox has a grin ...........//
Peace.....

Yo peeps tell me what u think bout my rhyming of "lifes worste "07"

yo c'mon if u gunna look u should at least b tellin wut u think u kno

It was aight man......Nice drop for a newbie.............Return da favour http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...4458#post464458

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this was ok therhymes were kinda simple and the flow wasnt all that..keep postin (no beef)

are you sure about that? LOL im sorry but your full of shit, you cant go 3 months with out a trial.

stop tring to sound street cause your not, you aint even a thug cause if you were you would have known someone could only post bail while your waiting for a trial. and they cant hold you 3 months with out a trial.........

please leave with your wack ass bullshit fake rhymes

bitch shut the fuck up i didnt ask for ur reality bitch u from new mexico u aint represtin shit we dont even car bout u peeps boi

LMAO.....shut you wannabe read my shit it will make you realize how fuckin wack you are.

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simple.. needs better flow return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=51173

u pussy's cant rhyme 2 save ur life coz i fukd ur wife with a chill and put her on the pill she sed damn biggie u've got skill espiacially on tha hill i went 4 da kill, i fuked her soooo hard in her own yard she made up excuses like biggie u dropd ur gay card i had 2 discard. u mcess r just fake u put ur own picture on ur birthday cake i fukd ur mom and made u next to tha lake, and she was screamin 4 FUCK sake.

this aint no fuckin battle its a key style bitch so fuck u fuck ur rhyme peace
fuckin wanskta god damn cant do a keystyle wit out sum1 on my bac to battle

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