Aight look,
Im tryin to shine in the spot light it's not right but still Im tryin to feed my family and get that simple *20* dolla bill.

It feels like my life is goin down hill, and I gotta get my girl of them mothafuckin pills. She's takin to many, and god I can't loose her, and my dad is a drug dealer, I'll leave that to you *Sir* (God)

I know it seems silly to ask fo yo help, but theres notin wrong wit me, this shits bad fo my health. No, I can't forgive the shit thats happend to me, maybe I could if it didn't happen so *Badly G*.

It's like a simple moment stuck in my head wit no where to go, It's like Im still in the Minors but Wanna Go Pro.

This rap shits bout to make my head go nuts, I gotta stay away from the hoes,whores,and sluts.

Crazy mothafuckas can't eva get the truth, Im endin this shit wit a*Pop Pop* o shit my girl got the gun loose.

kinda depressin man, shit it really is good though, strong lyrics, i like it

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I liked it. Parts of it I didn't agree with like..

"No, I can't forgive the shit thats happend to me, maybe I could if it didn't happen so *Badly G*. "

We're supposed to forgive, no matter what happens, that way God can forgive us for doing what we do. You probably know this already though, and you're just struggling with actually doing it, as I am too. It's hard that's all I can say about it..

This was a good writing. I liked how it read like thoughts straight from your head...just wondering and wanting help. And it's never silly to ask for help. Look at all the stuff that happens and then ask yourself if God wants you to go through it alone. There's no way He'd expect us to go through it alone. Just turn to him and He'll help.

I hope this reply wasn't too corny for you :P Just the stuff that came to my head as I read this.

That shit was deep. Depressing like what Dire said, but was good. Keep up the good work dawg.

Depressing dawg.................This is too much for u dawg.......................Nice lyrics.........Deep shit.........Keep spittin