iight ay yo..../
iight dis is here is for all u mutha fucking gangsta's, thugs, robbers and gun packer's/

u bastards make laugh, all runin around act-in up/
tellin people u gunna kill umm or fuck um up/
iight yo lets get a reality cheack here/
yall kids and young men, livin in the hood/
yall aint experianced the real deal/
yall think ur poore, yall think u fuckin da best whore/
well lemme lay it like diss/
u aint seen hardship n poverty/
ur whole mutha fucking life is a novalty/
yall make me sick, i could pick a million of u wanksta's n hit you wid a big stick/
yall talk about what u dont no, yall Disillusioned if you think ur shit hits harder then a fusion/
when was da last time u saw the news?/
yall no how many mutha fucking jews got killed for nothin/
yall no how many mutha fucking africans die a day cus they starvin/
yall goin home eatin as much as u like, fuck me a afro eats in a year wat u chuck in the bin a day/
fuck u people u think ur IT lemme tell u, ur a mutha fucking gay/
yall think sex is kool, in some countries sex is a death sentance/
u ever herd of HIV, comon i bet yall seen it on the TV/
so sit down turn around n start listanin to me/
u got it hard, u have to look over yo shoulder and whatch yo back, aint that a fact/
but what ur runin from is u mutha fucker/
ur runin from a jumped up kid thinkin he's tough/
livin his life making other peoples rough/
i aint prechin, i aint teachin, im seeing it foreal/
look in yo heart n make a mutha fuckin deal, keep dis shit real/
put yo life in perspective, start usin mutha fuckin contraceptive/
what right have u got to end a G's live Prematurely/
why the fuck u actin so stupid n immaturely/
if u ever come close to the real deal, u have experianced loss/
i bet u remember how dat shit hurts, no matter how much some1 blurts, u cant hide da pain/
i bet u cried yo eyes out and cried revenge/
well disengage yo mind n think, its not the end, its a fuckin sighn/
go out yo front door, walk right past that dirty whore/
you on a journy now, ur on that sidewalk/
think about it, that sidewalk leads anywhere, its like gettin trapped in a river i swear/
u can turn left or right or carry on up dat road, who knows where you'll go/
u see my point, ur makin those choices not me or ur mutha fuckin G/
u are, if you point that gun and use it, its your fault no one elses/
think what u just done loadin n firin that gun/
remember how u felt when u had loss, now their's some1 at home feelin the same, to u i bet its just a GAME/
its not, ur a joke dont fuck around ur end up gettin smoked/
u might be big and tough, but remember their is always some1 bigger then you/
who knows next time u could end up gettin smoked/
think about it, it aint hard or extrodanery/
look in da dictionary for the meanin of free, be who u wanna be/
strive to acheive and be who u be/
BUT DONT U DARE MUTHA FUCKING TRAMMPLE ON ME/

HAHA fuck um all

long piece but true true.......drop was aight al in all

Wow, this was good. I liked the topic and how you stuck to it the whole time. The flow was a little rough but I liked the topic so much I didn't let that bother me. I completely agree with all of what you said.

"yall no how many mutha fucking jews got killed for nothin/
yall no how many mutha fucking africans die a day cus they starvin/
yall goin home eatin as much as u like, fuck me a afro eats in a year wat u chuck in the bin a day/"

Those lines were really good. I think about that type of thing all the time and try to appreciate my life no matter what's happening in it.

"well disengage yo mind n think, its not the end, its a fuckin sighn/
go out yo front door, walk right past that dirty whore/
you on a journy now, ur on that sidewalk/
think about it, that sidewalk leads anywhere, its like gettin trapped in a river i swear/
u can turn left or right or carry on up dat road, who knows where you'll go/
u see my point, ur makin those choices not me or ur mutha fuckin G/"

Some more really goood lines. You hit some really good topics when talking about this.

"u might be big and tough, but remember their is always some1 bigger then you/"

^so true..

When I first opened it I was thinking "ah hell, another long one..", cause normally I lose focus on the long ones, but this one held my attention. Good writing.

thanks dawg much respect,, uppin

WTF tell him the truth thats why this board is so gay, its not great, you didnt flow at all, your tring to sound street but you sound more like a suburban kid who thinks he knows what goes on in the streets,

please try to rhyme, i wasnt even going to reply to this until i saw people telling you it was good when its actually shit.

stupid mutha fucka, u just dont get it do ya, man i dont like will smith u do, see ma point fool, g what looser u dont no what the fuck i bin thro

Sorry Flu, I liked it and I said why. If I don't like something usually I don't give a response.

It was good in my opinion, what else can I say...

uppin for responce

i thought it was aight.. a lil too long for my liking tho but its tru lots of the ma fuckas on here especially actin like they hardcore gangstas and from the ghetto while they sittin at a computer? lol anyways keep writin peace.

HA HA HA thats all i gotta say

hell yea cuz ma point exactly,,,, uppin....also not many gangstars i no dat spend life in front of a moniter

haha yea man see thats why i dont even pretend ta be a crazy ass ma fuckn gangsta, cuz i know i aint 1 lol. peace

.........nice drop dawg..............