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Old 05-27-03, 10:51 PM   #1
GrYm StYlE
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Angry Deat tactics

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FUCK A SMALL DOSE/I''LL EAT U NIGGAS LIKE PRIME ROAST/
I''M DESIGNED TO BLOW/GET YA TOE TAGGED LIKE JOHN DOE/
U FUNNY FAGGATS DON''T WANNA DO BATTLE WIT THIS RAP SHIT/
I''M MASSIVE/JURASSIC/U PASSIONATE LIKE A SLAPPED BITCH/
DISPOSE OF U NIGGAS LIKE TRASH/HOW U FIGURE U''D LAST/
WIT THE PEN & PAD/I KILL U FAGS/LIKE A TRIGGER BLAST/
U BIG& BAD?/THEN STEP UP/& I SUGGEST U REST UP/
U THOUGHT U WAS THE BEST,SON?/WELL MY NIGGA,GUESS WHUT?/
TAKE A BOW/SIT DOWN/THIS SOUND/SPITS ROUNDS/HITS CLOWNS/
GET FOUND/SIC BOUND/RECOGNIZE/THE GRIMREEF''S THE SHIT NOW
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Old 05-27-03, 11:06 PM   #2
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dawg, dawg, dawg......iight calm down, whack off yo caps for a start, and lets decipher this, ur flow was none, ur wordplay was elimentary, u need to seriusly elivate ur shit big time, man rap aint just bout bein angry and agrresive, ur verses shoulda been like dis.....

U BIG N BAD/
THEN STEP UP/
N I SUDJEST U REST UP/

u see it dont work n puttin it down how u did it still dont work, in truth its whack, but read some ppls shit around here and take advise and learn.

peep ma shit called Morals.............

keep tryin..
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