... Feat. White Wash and Clockwork Orange



...i rose from the Root of all evil,
started searching for answers
If money didnt grow on trees,
why did banks have so many Branches?!
no second chances were handed,
id almost given up hope
not even Hangman was prepared to show me the ropes.
A wise oak spoke to me,
told me something i shouldnt ignore
"life's a Pirate Ship,
just try not to get Over Bored"
So with this in mind,
i drank each rain droplet i caught in the goblet
and gradually,
in the tree of life, this weed began to blossom...
A stray shaft of sunlight bathes
the soiled ground
The shaft evades straying clouds
between seclusion and beautiful
single solitude
the crowded, stoic skyscrapers.
Upon the streets, shattered glass and stone
Crushed cans and torn papers linger.
Black soot drowns the cracks
And suffocates the possibility of living.
But the shaft of light drifts through possibility
And falls upon a single blossom of life.
so keep this in mind
realitys mentality is about done
none livin in poverty almost provoked
to fail is outcome
The root's ill never know
As time pass's by..
The branch's grow
I sit here though the season's
Daily shower's & The heat of the son
But i never know the reason's
The reason for life..
The tension grows fine
You could cut it with a knife
The wind strike's me like a spear
& now my time's up...
The end of a Era.

Pretty Good... Up Tha Vocab a Lil Tho & Also Tha Flows a Bit Hard 2 Follow But Otha Than That a Dope Drop.. Mos Definantli Ill

pZ.. Spitzophrenic

not even Hangman was prepared to show me the ropes.........clever shit

life's a Pirate Ship,
just try not to get Over Bored"......more cleverness

that was mad........i swear its like the more elivated u get the shorter ur lines get...........it starts off when ur wack ur lines r small then as u elivte that get longer......then when u elivate more ur liens get shorter...........dotn know why i just exlpained that oh well.....i'll drop

^ and both lines you quoted were by yours truely, so i cant be that wack - lol.

The reason the bar length kept shifting is because its three verses in one, 3 different emcees, 3 different styles, but its all been put together into one verse, thats how collabs seem to go among vets. .

Thanks for the feedback anyways, if i see a piece of yours up, i'll holla. .

not even Hangman was prepared to show me the ropes.
^^good work... flippin battle lines in serious drops... nice wordplay (Over Board) etc etc... 8/10

^ Only an 8/10 ?! Pssssssh! Were better than you anyways. .

^^You aint THAT dope... lol

^ lol, i was kidding my man, im glad you took it as it was inteneded!

^ lol, i was kidding my man, im glad you took it as it was inteneded!

your very insightful kid. most of that shit was hott.

"If money didnt grow on trees,
why did banks have so many Branches?!"<<heard man times but still shows your insightful. stay up^~

^ Will do, and this is a collab, me, white wash and clockwork orange. .

liked it alot---tells it like it is----reality 4 ya
hold true to yer source

similar content---like minded

new here & lookin 4 feedback---

first post Mysticl Minstrel

wrote this one last night
Just another Madman....

let me know what ya think

thanX

peace

I like how ppl wright these long ass songs and expect ppl to read them lol. but yours i really enjoyed reading, the one guy is right your flow is a bit hard and your vocab is kinda weak~!

^ Your missing the point, its a collab, 3 verses so the flows not gonna be the same, nor is the vocab. .

This shit is way better than your old shit, of course... Ha, ha... but you have gotten better dunny. The topic was all magical an' shit, ha, ha... no other niggas on RB writin' shit like that. Madly uppin' this joint. HOLLA.