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Verses by Tuesday
Voting Ends Thursday or when polls close

No biting, feeding or recycling.

No D/R or Hata

10-30 lines

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Checkin........................................... .................................................. In................................................ .................................................. ......Right Now............................................... ....................................... G H O S T.

*actually pressed wrong forum and stumbled upon this thread..*

whoa

checkin in................................................ ............

'gone'

You will be gone...

*Lights dimmer*

Soon, Lil gangsta.

Prepared to be merked.

*Removes himself from existence with 1-N-Gone*

G H O S T.

.................yea OK.............



yo
BEAST? bitch ur muh-pet bout' as scary as a shadow puppet/
spy'd-ur harmless lines, u mrs. im fuckn u up jus tryn tuff-it//

timber! goes ur record i stood in ya tracks jus so i could scuff it/
make u walk J to tha hell-hole ur rhymes are beat down i had enough of-it//
im bout to shove-it like princes' pants in that dove-hit to this bitch so hard he'll covet every word like van-halans love hits!!//
but, easy does it i condemn ur demon verse like HE above IT,
i proceed to clog ur butt spit, like phat asses on tha flo to club-it//
damn dude, ur lifes untraced like tha sun came up from both ways/
is-cera-bus in town hop on a death-hound cuz im sendin ur bitch ass back to hades//

u could spit double my lines and ya weak style would still drag-on/
tha shadow falls like im billy lee leavin u hurricane-spun//
get soned, like i switched hits to ur backside, made light ur dark-hide//
its like apartheid, cuz ur dark ass and I are NOT TIED!!//

u lied to urself, god? please u couldnt mount a limp-ass//
u fit tha skript of a shadow creep, grabbin on kids who go past//
i suggest u go play tha 'sims' in tha dark and u can be real shadow god at long last//

*put u to sleep*

my words jus clapped u up like i was spittin thunder/
u could pie-rat, and still not equal my plunder//

after-death ul forever be wonderin, like waitin for a wayans to sunburn/
been pushed in tha grave already 8 feet, seems it wont bother u when i shove u 1 more under...............................


*spellin mistakes*

Sad...Merkin Time.

-DESTROY~YOUR~ANATOMY~AND~GET~YA~MORPHIN, EMPLOY~A~CATASTROPHE~AND~LEFT~YA~AN~ORPHAN..
-DEPLOYED~MY~MASTERY~AND~SEVERED~YOUR~ORGANS, ENJOYED~THE~FLATTERY~BUT~NOW~YOUR~CLEFT~LIKE~GORGO N..

[..::||~LET THE ONSLAUGHT BEGIN~||::..]
1-N-GONE ain't a 'soldier', when someone 'yells take cover', this bitch GRABS~THE~BLANKET..
'Go to war' with ya 'imagination' and STAB~YA~FAKE~SHIT, and punch ya face until it SNAPS~AND~BREAKS~BITCH~!..
You SMACK~THE~PAVEMENT, I'm a killa homophobic nerd cuz i'll 'HACK~THIS~GAY~KID~!..
*Fag* couldn't get 'air time on NICK~AT~NITE', not even the 'intro song' for 'DICKS~AND~DYKES'.. (Dick Van Dyke)
I'll destroy ya corpse cuz I'm KEEN~TO~SCRIMMAGE and nigs lookin for you on billboards sayin have you SEEN~THIS~IMAGE!..
Punch his corpse 'till his SPLEENS~A~BLEMISH, i'll delete microsoft paint and leave 'SCENE'~DIMINSHED~!'..
Feeble with 'ENGROSSED~MATERIAL', 'lethal uppercut on stages' leave YOUR~GHOST~IMPERIAL..
I'm 'equipped' wit 'spoons' cuz i 'killed' MOST~THE~CEREAL to leave you a 'victim' of the most GROSS~ETHEREAL'~!..
This 'fag' ain't 'ill' he just 'HOST~VENEREAL', my boy got up in ya ass so i'll take the 'STRANGE~SYED'..
Give you a 'cerebral aneurysm' so your VEINS~DIES, couldn't think of 'bigger punches' though the anny increased ya BRAIN~SIZE..
Like 'earthquakes', i'll SHATTER~YOUR~STRUCTURE until your skin is FATTER~FROM~RUPTURES..
Like 'freepainting' ya corpse gets SPLATTERED~AND~PUNCTURED, punch hit '2x as hard' and leave MATTER~ALL~JUNCTURED~!..
I'm 'PEEIN~ON~LOSERS' cuz ya 'rhymes are str8 shit', like FECES~ON~RULERS~!..
My lyrical PIECES~ARE~BRUISERS, only way 'he'll get a vote' is if he 'INCREASES~HIS~USERS'~!.. (Multiple accounts.)

Digest that, Punk.
G H O S T.

i perposely didnt use caps or apostrophes or all that shit cuz i thought maybe ur vet status would keep u from doin that.............but oh well......

votes

I think Shadow God got this one even though he capitalized all his punches... A pretty good battle here, both of your raps were laid out a lil weird with some senetences not making any sense whatsoever, but Shadow God one:
get soned, like i switched hits to ur backside, made light ur dark-hide//
its like apartheid, cuz ur dark ass and I are NOT TIED!!//
^^1-n-GONE's best line^^



The only problem was he went over the same topics over and over (Talks about killing ur structure 4 lines str8 and erasing ur image) OTher than that a good battle

thanx for tha vote appreciate tha breakdown......................
uppin............................................. votes...................................

I HAVE TO SAY Shadow

-N-GONE ain't a 'soldier', when someone 'yells take cover', this bitch GRABS~THE~BLANKET..
^^best line of the battle^^

I'm 'PEEIN~ON~LOSERS' cuz ya 'rhymes are str8 shit', like FECES~ON~RULERS~!..

My lyrical PIECES~ARE~BRUISERS, only way 'he'll get a vote' is if he 'INCREASES~HIS~USERS'~!.. (Multiple accounts.)


^^^^^^NICE but u didnt fallow the rules u capitalized yo punches is like you bolded yo punches thats the thing i didnt like

1-N-Gone

Nothin that realy suprised me....u could have done much better

Vote: Shadow

return the favor
Heavyweight tittle me vs evolve

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1-N-GONE ain't a 'soldier', when someone 'yells take cover', this bitch GRABS~THE~BLANKET..
^^best line of the battle^^

I'm 'PEEIN~ON~LOSERS' cuz ya 'rhymes are str8 shit', like FECES~ON~RULERS~!..

My lyrical PIECES~ARE~BRUISERS, only way 'he'll get a vote' is if he 'INCREASES~HIS~USERS'~!.. (Multiple accounts.)

Digest that, Punk.
G H O S T.


best lines of the entire battle......

vote- shadow....

as explained before nuthin really from 1-n-gone but elevate.........
stay up......

return the favor and vote on the light weight battle its gettin slept on and swayed like a biatch...thanks....

well...1n u had an aight flow..i seen betta from u..the punches were aight..nuthin hit too hard mostly in the dark...now shadow god..had good wrdplay the punches were aight too...the blanket line is recycled...funny but recycled...but u had betta flow with punches...btw ah nevermind...vote=shadow...111

Vote - Shadow God

1ngone...ya opener was nice..the rest was good..but ya had some played concepts...flow was off a bit...not enuff creativity...

lines felt are...
u could spit double my lines and ya weak style would still drag-on/
tha shadow falls like im billy lee leavin u hurricane-spun//
get soned, like i switched hits to ur backside, made light ur dark-hide//
its like apartheid, cuz ur dark ass and I are NOT TIED!!//


Shadow...ya came wit nice creativity and nice punchez overall...there was some forced multi's but the rest were nice...felt you came harder than 1nGone...

lines felt are...
You SMACK~THE~PAVEMENT, I'm a killa homophobic nerd cuz i'll 'HACK~THIS~GAY~KID~!..
*Fag* couldn't get 'air time on NICK~AT~NITE', not even the 'intro song' for 'DICKS~AND~DYKES'.. (Dick Van Dyke)
I'll destroy ya corpse cuz I'm KEEN~TO~SCRIMMAGE and nigs lookin for you on billboards sayin have you SEEN~THIS~IMAGE!..
Punch his corpse 'till his SPLEENS~A~BLEMISH, i'll delete microsoft paint and leave 'SCENE'~DIMINSHED~!'..
and ya first two...
-DESTROY~YOUR~ANATOMY~AND~GET~YA~MORPHIN, EMPLOY~A~CATASTROPHE~AND~LEFT~YA~AN~ORPHAN..
-DEPLOYED~MY~MASTERY~AND~SEVERED~YOUR~ORGANS, ENJOYED~THE~FLATTERY~BUT~NOW~YOUR~CLEFT~LIKE~GORGO
N..



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