what happened to our triangle
why has it become such a huge tangle
i guess you can call me the point
the point of our triangle
the heartless one out of us all
i haven't let anyone get to me
but you have
you them get to it all
it use to be the three of us
not anymore
people would try to break our triangle
but we were the strongest of them all
they said triangles are the strongest things
that they won't ever break
i guess they were WRONG
this one did

This is my first post so have mercy

it was headed in tha right direction,work on more vocab,and poetry doesnt always have to rhyme so im not gonna say anything about it not rhyming,sometimes it gives your piece more finess,but your goin in tha right direction,keep postin and elevatin,take our criticism if its positive and utilize it to better your skills,even if it isnt positive criticism.peace out boo.

Thanks for your advice!!