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verse 2 makin it betta
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The boy from da decent paid fam/
my moms had to scram/ cuz pops always had a bottle in the hand/ not comin home till 2 a.m/ a fight every night/ into the early morn/ neva slept good until she was gone/ takin her 3rd born/ now my families torn, apart/ into 2 pieces like a pop tart/ u dont know how hard it is to live the life that i lived/ as a kid, i was always left alone wit nobody eva home/ i feel like i raised myself on my own/ now i'm grown and reminisin/ these are the reasons for my addiction/ I'm only inflictin pain into my self/ I admit i need a lil help/ but wuts help gonna do/ when they cant even compare to wut you been through! Last edited by deeni : 05-30-03 at 09:49 AM. |
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dawg,,,,, shit man this coulda been the illest fosure what u got was tight but the feelin n all was their alittle longer n deeper woulda made dis tight as
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nice drop, definitely needs to be extended u were goin places wit it man
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The verse has a good concept but it need s to be elivated with better vocab and better shit
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