The first one seemed pretty popular, or at least it attracted some attention, so......why deny the public? One more time off the dome as usual.....

Sprawled out in front of me, a firm naked frame,
my love muscle pulsates at the sight of the dame,
slowly, I climb on top, kissing from on pair of lips to the next,
grasping both breast as I prepare for more ruff sex,
slide right inside, at first slow an steady, startin off real smooth,
then quick jerking motions as I proceed to get in the groove,
steady bangin, bed squeakin, she lets out loud moans,
turn her over, grasp firmly, now the moans turn to groans,
knees bruised we recoupe as she straddles my waist,
sheets clenched, we kissed french, as I released my thick paste,
breathing hard we share a smile, both clearly satisfied,
then she layed down, face down, givin me a view of the ass that's mine,
we both pause, calm and silent from the extraneous engagement,
slammed hard, her buttocks red as if slammed on some pavement,
the moment ends again as I arise arms out and stretchin,
she smiles and I know my baby loves my lunchbreak sexins....

Lol................It was cool

it was aight but i liked da first one better

Lol It Was Alright Man...Use More Vocab. Next Time Though...Other Than THat It Was Good

Mines was better then this! I liked the first one

I NEVER HEARD THE FIRST ONE BUT I LIKED THIS ONEE...OOOOOOHHHHH I JUST BUST A NUT.....SIKE.LOL
CHECK THIS ONE OUT FOR ME.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=53075

it was aiight...

i think this is nice but yeah i agree the first one was better....the imagery on the first one is more intense than this one..but i liked it.....is there more and more ruff sex to come???? hehehe

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