my flows are hard and i spit bars sicker than sars/
my lyrics on fire they could launch a rocket to mars/
im better than most and i have fun clappin hoes/
i dont write for rappers so dont call me the ghost/
i terrorize rappers and tear their whole demeanor apart/
they called me jason cause im a black rapper eatin mc's hearts/
abuseful to anyone who step in the ring/
my lyrics are royal i should of been crowned the king/
im too hott for tv somebody call world guiness records/
im bout to triple platinum in a matter of seconds/
how can one mc be so furious/
they ask why am l litsenin to u i must be delirious/
im two seconds away from gettin incarcerated/
cause niggaz hated and im bout to bust my p80/
i aint scared of niggaz tryin to bring me down/
my force grows wit every attempt to shut me down/
if i was battlin and losin severely/
i'd still would come at'em wit things stored in my memory/

the shit started out simple but got better
okay wordplay, up the vocab and u got potential
return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=51173

it was a solid verse, not that creative, better wordplay can also have been used, but keep spittin, i like tha way your verbalz were clean and flowed, peace, 1 luv

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tight^^^^^^^^^^^^^ i aint typin it again much luv

yo thanks forall the love

It was allright but you need a bit of elivation my point only drop shit oin here if you no youre gunna get a good responce so go over it till its done right

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