Im lyrically insane/
mentally deranged but physically trained to only inflict pain/
to those who try to give me a bad name/
this aint no game/
so dont try to play me/
i got a short temper/
and wont hesitate to dismember u from limb 2 limb/
and kick dirt on u with your own timbs/
ur future is dim/
like that bedroom light when i say goodnite to your children/
i have no feelins/
no remorse for those who try to knock me off course/
I been in all sorts of situations/
I act wit no explanation/
take care of whoever i'm facin/
I'm half man half amazin/
the last temptation, like ja rule/
but you'll neva hear me say where would i be without u/
its more like I dont give a fuck about u/
your nobody/
a waste of sperm, the definition of a human germ/
when r you goin to learn that if u fuck wit me/
the next place your reppin is the inside of an earn!

ryhmin was too simplistic, make it more complex, another thing i hate is words shortented like UR etc..., try to add multi-s and stuff to kepp the flow goin!

keep elevatin dawg!

Simple Drop...........Lyrics were simple as hell.........But this drop is audio material...........It would be a Nice audio........I think dat this drop was Nice for a newbie