Ok some of you may have read the first verse but the second verse is new and a continuation on the theme. I know its long but please check it i put alot of effort into this piece.


The darkness inside the room blinds my eyes to the truth
The blackness of the situation at hand only pulls the noose
The rain beating hard I understand every last drop
I stop from my task to break into memories from atop
The honing of skills confined me to this world of death
The blood on my hands shows the brutality I posses
Connect with another force into this falling planet
Stabbed forward with eyes closed into the netherworld I banish
Thunder awakens the mind I study his mind pattern
The evil standing just down the hall glowing red from the lantern
Quiet like a phantom
I traverse forwards in to my position
In blurred vision I complete the last ever killing of my mission
Thickened blood pours out from the man’s neck
I got feelings deep inside of me but now I cant regret
The alarm sounds suddenly everything becomes hectic
I got my sword poised and ready for the next hit
My route is marked I run straight for the stairway
Gunshots whisk past my head no more than a hair away
Unsheathed I decapitate those at close range
Using body as shields I finish those who caused pain
The rain is getting harder I feel myself slipping
The halls drenched in blood and my awareness is missing
After a few seconds I see my chance to escape
The fire exit descends and I aint got not time to waste
When into the streetlights I feel I’m bleeding
Mixed with the cold rain my leg is wreathing
Gleaming I can see the candle calling me back home
Climbing 3 floors and I feel alone
Sit down on the tatami and prepare for my final calling
Bow down in shame to my ancestors my visions falling
See the steel shine this is how it must always end
My stomachs slit open and into sleep I descend
The darkness now feels more welcoming I’m warm
The silence resounds and I’m torn
Everything closes down and I see the truth
It’s just a shame now it’s no use

(Beat and style change)

I listen closely to the patter of the heavens
Peering through the mist I hear the clattering of weapons
Henchmen with black faces, black horses
Approach quicker followed by the enemies black forces
The dampness in the air brings the taste of those passed
Our brothers gone but within their spirits last
The village remains still as this evil closes nearer
Peasants pray to god for this time they fear her
Will they hear her?
Or understand her message when it’s never been clearer
Our brothers have forever waited for this moment
The death filled minds spread a need for atonement
A closing, our vision becomes united in goal
We’re armed and our inner thoughts are controlled
The first beast enters its face shadowed in darkness
The screaming of its soul shows it’s far from heartless
I harness my strength and lunge for its weak spots
Head rolls but then instantly I feel that my heat drops
The violence of the killing transports me to a third place
All I see is the dark blood pouring from our brother’s face
Angrily I surge forward I have gained a sense of Martyring
I’m alone and I use aggression to fight with this dark thing
The battle seems slow as I mutilate those near
Sensing a power I guard my brothers without fear
Thunder claps sound in the distance displaying the devil’s demise
As I behead the last foe I see the reflection from his mind
My adrenaline has faded I see the results of the battle
A stench pollutes the air as another body falls from the saddle
Surrounding me all I can see is death
Hounding me a feeling of my own detest
Was I so blind I did not see my own wrong doings?
Everybody around me has fallen I hear crying
I look back up the mountain to see a mother’s baby dying
I run towards her but she crawls away screaming
From such a quest how had I not read the true meaning?
In cowardice and fear I run
Up thicker into the forest
My feet are getting heavy…
I feel like I have been running forever…
Will I ever find an end?…

Aight hit me up wit comments peace

This was Cool good Topic

fuck that you aint gettin no replies for shitty responses like that. give criticism thats the whole point of me posting it. when you do ill check yours

Fuck That Dude i dont need no replies i said what i had to say about it
I dont need replies most people on this board SUCK

^^^^^^Why dont u just leave because after what u juss said , No1 wont read ur shit..........Anyways This drop was Ill , I like ur content and ur style , Da topic was Nice........Ur lyrics were on topic.......Ill shit man

No I say what I say because im good
I thought it was good nicely done
Topic was cool
Sorry i dont dick ride

fuckin newbies cloggin up this board uppin

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HOT! nuff said. cant aruge. if you feel you can. FUCK YOU!

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uppin

over all i liked it--good story--great content--can teel ya put effort inta the rhyme scheme--i have ta say I thought it ended a little weak---?is it still to be continued....
but what the fuck do i know--I'm just a newbie cloggin up the board----

would like to hear it to the audio---

appreciate any honest words ta my posts

Mystical Minstrel

&

Just anotha Madman....

peace

its not to be continued the whole point is the ninja whilst protecting his village has seen the devestation he has caused from his way of life. the whole point of both verses is both characters were blinded to the truth of what they were really doing (murder) but its only in the aftermath they understand what they have done. in the end the character kills himself (the imagery of him running deeper into a never ending forest is his afterlife punishing him for what he has done). sorry this is quite complicated i know but thats why i like the verses so much.

uppin