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Topic...
Laying it down

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What ever it is, shit? Can I have some clarification here, j/k
I'm jus babblin on to get to a 100,
Oh yeah checkin in, an vendetta, oh please do sho, I want to claim a victory against you,
Why?? Cause I murdered you on a slept ass battle...
T-

check in...
imma little late...
i had finals
in...
imma drop right now
holla!
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the gambler wipes his brow as he asks the dealer to 'hit me'
the winning pot he dropped in was worth his families whole delivery...
he hopes inside that he wont lose it...
but times before he had gone up in debt and high in credit
the gambler looks across the table and reluctantly grabs the down trodden card the dealer pulls from the top of the deck..
the gentlemen standing in the corner has now moved behind the chair of the gambler to make sure he doesnt split..
the gambler flips the card over and closes his eyes..decriptic..
card possesses his life..if he losses..his family has nothing..
dealer calls out 'yo joseph...show me ur hand'..
joseph glares at the dealer in a drastik ditch to 'demand' more time..
the clock on the wall begins to make noise and startles joseph..
clock srtikes 1..'times out joseph..what u got'
the gentlemen behind joseph has a grasp on his collar..
joseph wrenches the cards in his hands and prays silently as if he was bi pollar..
he flips his cards on the table..everyone senses disable-ment
the power goes and and its dark..
clock strikes 1:01...and the night is donw..
joseph didnt make it out of that room that night..
his plight was too far from reach..the deck was rigged..
the prolonged game was in order to get rid of joseph abridged..
joseph will never put his familes life on the line again..
this is what happens to a man so high in the rush of luck..
that when he lay's it down..(laying the cards down)..
saying i dont 'give a fuck' then he jeopardized his life..
and he is..no more..

yo vendetta i found time to spit tonight our shits set up in the front lines

luck with this shit

wheres this cat at?
holla!
im confused..is t-square=addlibb
if so..i jsut beat him 5-1 in our battle in front lines
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nope addlib is actually T-POUND ....

not t sqaure......................



-OnE--------------------------------------------------

ohh...my fault...thanx for the input
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no problem at all, as a repayment...

lol j/p....If other guy ever drops ill vote on this

could u check my RBTL match vs. Thug Whyte...

Vote For Better Verse Please

Thanks Alot

-OnE-

if i could i would..but thug whytes in my crew
good luck yo
holla!
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I'm layin shit down like fuckin granite on tha ground/
Or mothers at midnight who dont wanna hear another sound/
Layin it down like Tyson to a 90 pound fighter in tha first round/
Fuck a story I'm still stayin on topic like I'm on Vendettas bitch/
Am I layin down so good ya avitars smokin, or is that a glitch/
T-square is always layin it down, no matter what tha fuck it is/
It could be crack smack dope coke shrooms speed or whipids/
Layin rap down like poor folk makin their beds on boxes/
Down like skills of math to emcees who cant count their losses/
Fuck it I'm layin down 10 to be even an be fair... Peace says T-/

What ever tha fuck you want it to be

Vendetta just came harder in this one . i liked his verse more!
better flow, multies, metas, fuck it, better everything...

and BTW vendetta... in RBTL u can 'crew vote' but as long as it is FULLY explained... and Not toally and utterly dick riden! like not sayin ' i vote for vendetta cuz hes my crew leader'
as long as it is fully explained and Mad Man and Sand Accept it. it would be fine... but its all good...

vote Ven

iight man...thanks for the vote
1-0 me...
uppin*
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this is getting slept on...
uppin^^^^holla!
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this is getting slept on...
uppin^^^^
holla!
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