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Sand 1 33.33%
Eviley 2 66.67%
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Old 06-01-03, 09:42 PM   #1
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Sand (0-1) vs. Eviley (0-0)

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Check in's by Monday
Verses by Tuesday
Voting Ends Thursday

Topic...
A New Relationship


You're both checked in, so just spit.
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Old 06-02-03, 12:54 AM   #2
Kosta
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In Sweetie...*
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this should be good....


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Old 06-02-03, 08:25 PM   #3
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In....



Of course it's gonna be good


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I LOVE YOU too
 
Old 06-03-03, 01:24 AM   #4
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A New Relationship...

Alarm clock rang me to conscience oh not this
i hit the snooze in hopeful desires to stop it
but it came again so i gave right in and stood
thought of saving them sacrifice? but should
i put myself through the torture of losing her
or should i just let go so love's not abusin' her
confusing here all the factors that complete it
April 19th must have been on God's weekend
because i learned more on that day than in life
i had feelings to live entagled with ones to die
then she strolled past my eye the vision of love
and at that instant i knew that she was the one
and i usually dont give in...but this time i had'ta
she had the light growing. i didn't wait til after
work was finished dialed the phone and hid it
up against my ear well what is this right here
the girl that made me open my eyes. see life clear
and then she left. some of you know the story
what happened happened actions wont ignore me
the sunshine turned stormy and life was shit
i had just got out and shoved back in the pit
but it was worth it. then was the condition for
that binded home team not giving in to the visitor
i ask her what she hid it for. she wouldn't tell
she's the reason for my life's heaven and hell
she came through with what im sure she wouldn't
not because of feelings i just thought she couldn't
and we fell back to love's arms and got held closely
hearts hoping the moment wouldn't end so slowly
control me and us as we let the feelings pour out
and we put the past behind us and returned to the clouds
started our own new relationship together well kind of
and what ever we were previosly seeking was lost...

and all we could find was love.....


putting it all in God's hands....(trusting him for once)
we will see how this all turns out. me and eva
have started a new relationship between the two
of us. a stronger one. thats what this is about^
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Old 06-03-03, 02:34 AM   #5
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oops mistake...!
she didnt come through...^
but she put it in someone's
hands who will make everything
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Old 06-03-03, 02:38 AM   #6
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shaping up to be a good batte, nice records
yall peep this and ill return the favor............................................. .....................
 
Old 06-03-03, 02:43 AM   #7
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^ wtf ^







what are you talking about?

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Old 06-03-03, 07:16 AM   #8
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okay here it goes....good luck sweetie....


The True Relationship...

there i was stuck inbetween
i was tangled
the words of two
it seemed i was strangled
for it was me that got them in this love triangle
i was lost in a dark tunnel
full of emotion
surrounded my darkness
like an ocean
everywhich way i would turn
and have to make a choice
i tried to be civil
but hurt came out of my voice
noise that was not true to my heart
cause i knew i love one of them
right from the start
but yet i made a decision
it ripped into me like a
wound,cut,a deep incision
i invisioned something more then this
so i gave it to god
and i sent it with a kiss
down on my knees i closed my eyes
palm to palm the truth i cried
oh god i can't live this life
why me why now i can't decide
i confide in you
to help me out
cause i am no longer going to worry
i no longer have doubt
i leave it in your hands
cause either way ones life with end
so now i can't worry any longer
cause what kills us now only makes us stronger
for i can no longer ponder on what's right or wrong
because that's how the story ends that's my song
day to day i live with guilt
because i have to be strong
giving in early is not the way i was built
until that day
i saw his face
it was so sudden and fast at pace
i was in the clouds no
i was flying through space
i was in love again in another love case
i gave in and now i am happy
because i love that guy and now he can have me
the lessoned i learned is forever remembered
i no longer fake love i am not a pretender
love from another is not what i confide by
because love is always there it's deep inside
but all these lovers i cannot strife
because the true relationship
i am living is called my life.
 
Old 06-03-03, 10:21 AM   #9
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OoOoOoOoO....hmmmm.....hhhhmmmmm....Well...Well... .Well...I'm not to sure....

Hmm... Ok, ok, ok. Vote = Eviley. Wasn't easy to decide. Pretty much a toss up, but yeah. I had to vote for her, you know, hope you get lucky when she wins Sand, :P hahaha, JOKING! Calm down...ok I'm sorry I'll stop now.

Oh, that was kind of mean, putting them against each other. LoL,
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Old 06-03-03, 01:20 PM   #10
Kosta
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hopefully no one will vote...
i cant walk around knowing
that i beat my lover in a
battle...thats not right...is it?
very good job eva. ummm..
*glad to be in your life*
your the best....and i love you
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Old 06-03-03, 03:14 PM   #11
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and you think i can?? hmm
hmm anyway
i love you
andi am glad that you in my life too
BBBBBAAABY!!!

OHHH YEAH lol
 
Old 06-03-03, 03:16 PM   #12
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thanks bruklor for your vote

lol even though it was just a toss up :P

haha j/k

thankz
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Old 06-03-03, 06:18 PM   #13
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vote=eviley

damn this was nice. both of you did exactly what the topic said, no flips or anything, but it was still beautiful.
eviley just had that extra imagery and flow(shut up sand, I know you have a dope one) that won this.
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Old 06-03-03, 07:26 PM   #14
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Yo if you want, I'll edit the polls
So this won't be on the battle record.
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Old 06-04-03, 02:49 AM   #15
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why would you want to do that

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