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Your Daughter, My Heart, Dont Break Us Apart!
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Im sittin in my room thinkin lookin to the sky/
Wondering if your mother will let me pass by/ My soul's out of control my world upside down in a black hole/ Cause you aint here, your mother dont care, I'm four years older/ Her heart grows colder and words get BOLDER every minute/ Feels like I'm alone in my heart and I'm the only one in it/ Pain infinite this cant be life, Yo she's my future wife how you gonna go and cause this strife/ C'mon you know my love is strong, I even went and tattooed her name on my arm/ I love you Erica no more obstacles I wanna be tanning with you somewhere tropical/ Away from misery and pain but right now my feelings are the victim of a serial killer they're slain/ From the main vein to my left aeorta, I miss you oh so much my hearts not working its out of order/ Gimme some water I'm breakin out sweats, Losing my breath, This is what love feels like broken a sudden death/ In my room here all alone, Watchin my bureau there lays my cellular phone/ Waiting for the illuminated light to blink, Even bringing it with me when I wash my hands in the sink/ I'm dedicated to you and I miss you, And I dont want your mother to be the judge in this case for me to dismiss you/ She says you're too young you're not ready for love, But she dont know love only the lord knows up above/ How do you split two souls apart, rip their heart and make them re-start/ New relationships dont work if you're still involved in the past/ And I sit and ask myself why I always end up last/ In the game of affection its seems my hearts in a infection, dissection of my happiness/ Forsaken by God from love, Forsaken by the Devil for pain, You wonder what drives a man to kill, makes him insane?/ Parents of another fuck with your brain and world/ I still dont understand why I can't see my girl/ I jus wanna come over, Can I come over, hold her tell that I care, Without you intervening over there, With a cold stare in your eye making my sweetheart cry to the point shes contemplating suicide/ You dont give her freedom and a smile, You'd rather piss her off gives you pleasure for a while,/ Well I'm gonna tear down ya house and capture her for my taking/ Cause I've got the super glue for this heart you are breaking, And I'm gonna fix it and make it work/ Keep your hatin ways to yourself you fuckin jerk/ We love each other like Sally met Harry/ I got that backwards but you wont be invited when we marry/ Wont be there when the kids are born/ I'm gonna be the reason why your family's torn/ You tried to fuck with me and make me go to my house never come back/ Well my hearts a million times stronger than that...your daughter loves the mack/ Payback is what you get and this aint no eminem story but in the end the audience will applaud me/ Laughing when you die and dancing at your wake/ Hope you burn in hell for this terrible mistake/ Who the hell are you for a relationship to break/ Did I give you permission to drop my heart rip the relationship and take my girl, my world who I breathe for/ Open the doors like a Gentleman try and fuck up what she has in store/ Go see another guy that'll ice her in the store, motherfuckers gon try and use her for pussy, Your daughter aint no whore/ What she needs is me in her life long dream/ Cause we are unseperable cant break up this team/ I love you I love you I love you I love you/ God answer my prayers so I can at least hug you/ I miss you darling I been gone for a while/ But without you when I die I wont be seen with a smile/ So Lord take my life now cause I can't live/ My attitude no longer positive its negative/ And I dont care whether heaven or hell/ Cause now a relationships story is closed would never tell/ If we were Mr and Mrs Right like them story tales/ But now my love is like the titanic, crashed when set sails/ My body's dying now I'm clammy and pail/ Ants eating me with maggots through my eyes, looking like Jason Voorhies Am I dead?/ Who cares, not even her mother if this flow she read/ Guess its getting kinda late now lay my head in bed/ Nervous of whats to come tommorrow whats ahead/ Hopefully I see her and hopefully god's hope and prayer/ That when I look to my left shes by my side holdin my hand right there/ |
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DAMN THIS IS THA LONGEST SHIT I EVA READ SINCE I CAME TO RB..........WOW!!!!!!!!!...
AND YEs it wus worth it next time dawg make it shorter...lol nice contend alot of emotions put in this piece nice drop Peep Warlords Anthem
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IP:
Sorry man lotta emotions here..im feelin this way right now man....im fucked up..tears and shit
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Ill piece.......Deep shit man.....I was feelin it.........Long but worth reading........U expressed ur feelings in this piece....Nice Tittle and concept..........Checkout ur Pms.......I send u a message
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yeh yeh nice man...(im telling everyone this) but im expectin my kid within a week so i probs will relate to those emotions nice stuff..but ur shit pisses me off the way u leave spaces lol.....nice worth da read
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IP:
thanx uppin...I jus do the spaces so its easier to read
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IP:
deep shit dawg. great peice. a little lengthy but it is consistantly good. open mics are always better then there is so much emotion
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thanx still uppin
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this was def. ill, madd deep, yo, btw welcome to bre.1
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yea like everyone else said this has got alotta emtions in it....really long def...at times i thought it was kinda lame basic love lines shit like that.....but i can feel where your coming from to an extent cause i don't know your whole story but yea
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dope shit dawg..liked the new flow style, the vocab was blazin' too, the feelins felt real as fuck!
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it was nice yo.. mad deep emotional piece.. I feel for-ya dawg..
keep your composure tho, or go kill the girls parents.. lol.. nah, I'm jus play'n... 1 I liked this
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thanx for the replies...upp if you wish..
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.Feelin' It.
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Damn dogg. This joint was LONG AS FUCK. I read the whole joint though, and it was all on point. I'm feelin' you on your situation, I was in the same shit... it's some B.S. Deep shit kid, madly uppin' this joint. You always bring the hot shit.
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