Hey yo, these are some lyrics that i wrote up after my friend went into hospital for chronic depression, still writin the rest and gonna record it once ive finished it, get beta laura i luv you.


Your feelings are cold and so is ur heart,
’N’ the choice between family & friends is pullin you apart//
Inside you know that your not being true to you,
But you’ve made others happy so what tha fuck do you do?//
Ya go to your boi ‘n’ buy a G maybe two,
Sit their blazed thinking smokin’ would help you through//
But you have no friends or nobody you can talk and tell em how u feel,
Right now your life is like a drunk person at the wheel//
Cause life is pullin’ you off tha tracks,
But kid you gotta take care of yourself, stop watchin’ otha peoples backs//
You think bout suicide cause you wanna know if anyone would even care,
Would ya friends , ya family ‘n’ ya gurl even notice if you weren’t there,
While your parents are to busy fighting they not even aware//
That your in your room cuttin’ your wrists, the pain shows through your tears,
All because of tha shit you were put through by all your peers//
But you have to ignore tha call to put it to a end,
Cause fuck it happiness could be jus round tha bend//

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tell us what you think.... peace

ey can i get sum opinions attach linbksn ill hit ya bak i need sum feed back^^^^^

ey can i get sum opinions attach links n ill hit ya bak i need sum feed back^^^^^^^^^^^
Peace

i think this is really good....it comes from the heart....sometimes friends are great inspirations in writing....gotta keep up the work tho..

keep droppin

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i feel what u sayin...i dont really want to say its good, jus cuz of the topic naimeen? but keep doin what u do, and i hope ur friend finds her peace and place in the world

thnx for the views all...^^^^^uppin for more opinions............

Depression sucks. But this poem doesn't. Sorry for sleeping on it so long.

You think bout suicide cause you wanna know if anyone would even care,
Would ya friends , ya family ‘n’ ya gurl even notice if you weren’t there,
While your parents are to busy fighting they not even aware//
That your in your room cuttin’ your wrists, the pain shows through your tears,
All because of tha shit you were put through by all your peers//

Your lyrics really hit the nail on the head. Know what I mean?

~Shalom~

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yea thnx man ^^^^^uppin'....add some links ill vote on ya battles, or ahf a look at ur shit....

you should join my text battle crew hit me up with a pm

that shit was hard man nice spit

im feelin ya.nice lyrics,to the point.anyone could relate to them.keep them flowin.
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