YEAH! I finally finished this shit...I suck at cool edit, so it's a little fuck up...my mic isn't the greatest either.
anyways, here it is.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/u...tementmusic.htm

beat: atmosphere-modern man's hustle

tell me what you think.
Peace

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its all comin out of my left speaker...fix that......and yes..the quality is pretty shitty......no emotion..etc etc...

pz

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man... r u serious... how do u only have 1 ear... aim me 4 help... kiddo

DjX, yeah, I accidently recorded in mono, and I ran out of time before people got home so I couldn't re record.
I'll work on the emotion, this was jsut the first piece.
Out

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lol.. you're scared of parents hearing you rap or something?

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yo, this is pretty good still... 'specially 4 your first 1.... I was real feelin' the laid back feel to it.. serious 4 your first one, I'm givin' mad props to ya yo.. PM me with ya phone#... I need to talk to you

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yeah dude, not the parents, its my kid bro and sis that makeall the nois eand fuck me up, not mention grab the mic and yell into it.
meh, I'll get at you in a lil bit, thanks for the feedback.
Peace

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she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

u can stilll cahnge it from mono to stereo, and if u did record mono it should still come out of both speakers....

tahts how everyone with a condensor mic records...mono....

.pz.

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I'll play around with cooledit a bit. I have a buddy who's gonna help me out next time.
up

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^ i'm the buddy

I was really feeling this Pat. lol. I'm telling you you're better than Slug.

I'm sorry i couldn't save this track but i'll make the next one sound good.

Upping for Mr. Grant.

lol, hopefully I'll make it sound good so you don't have to.
as for the slug bit, I'll believe it when I get laid by a dwarf that looks like pamela anderson with a beard.
I hope that isn't in the enar future

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she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

"that was a little too close to the mic I'm sorry" - LMFAO, that was funny.

Wasn't to bad. Yeah the quality wasn't amazing, or that good, but still, its all good.

Kept the flow going, on beat and all, which is really good.

Lyrics are tight, but what else is new, its you. LoL
Once you get the sound a bit down, DOPE! You can bet I'll be burning your rhymes.


"She sleeps in my mind, no matter how I brake the rules."


Damn, you can sing too!

Good work man, my audio was horrible compared to that dude.

lmao bruk, this piece was so fuckin candid.

link me to your soundclick! I'm already burning Sand's audio, and a whole bunch of N Demiks lol

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^^^this was alright for your first audio... there is much room for elevation... and bruk... that pic in your siggy is very very disturbing...

Yo that shit would have been way better if u wasnt rappin like there was a monster under your bed man ... the intro kinda reminded me of somethin from the blair witch project lol.. but on the real it was pretty good considerin it was your first audio man keep up the good work and try havin more presence when u spittin